3 Stages of Heaven (X-RATED)

#1
hey ya'll...glad to see the board back up :D....thought id drop this peice...its about someone i used to go out with.....

3 Stages of Heaven
sexually, this is how i perceive the girl i been seeing
-she gotta hotter body that i could believe n'
..i mean.. shes got long blonde hair, and full lips;
big blue eyes, big breasts, and perfect hips..
she's got a round ass, and nice legs to match
and in between her legs, she's got the perfect s___ch

..just thinking about her now, gets my dick so hard
-if she was here now, id have to spread her legs apart!
id kiss her all over, and suck on her nipples
then when that was over, id work my way down the middle
id lick down one leg, right down to her feet..
then back up the other, to where her legs meet
id tease her a bit, and lick down around her thighs
..until she begged me to stick my tongue inside..

as i lick her clit, and move my tongue all around
she lets out a little squeal -uh, my favorite sound
she tastes so sweet, i think i could lick forever
man, id lick her wherever.. if it'd make her cum better
..she lets out another sound, and pulls my hair
then i feel her legs shake as they move towards the air
..my cocks so hard, i can't take it any longer!
-i stick it in her slow, as i kiss her for a moment
she looks so beautiful.. as i push in and out
man, this is definitely what love is all about..
..i pick up pace as we move for something different
-on our side, face-to-face..my 2nd favorite position
i feel a little tingle as i look in her eyes
-then, i kiss her softly.. as i cum deep inside..
i feel her legs shake again, as we reach another level
all i can think then.. is "hhhmm this must be heaven"
 
#3
I liked it, although I have to disagree with this >>

she looks so beautiful.. as i push in and out
man, this is definitely what love is all about..


but well yeah... maybe in the moment.

Nah for real though I liked this... you were very descriptive throughout but not in a nasty kinda way. Your structure was good and content wise I felt you had definitely captured the audience. Good confident piece.
 

Cown

Active Member
#6
You horny bastard

Flow was good, nice poem. I haven't seen anything like this before lol. When lust takes over you're outta control. The action of sex potrayed in a poem, well done :D
 

Belo

New Member
#11
lol. damn.. 3 horny ass poems ive read on here 2day... something in the air huh
And i'm not getting it.. lol
Nice poem.. were quite a few lines in there that made me laugh.. very nice indeed
By the way ur ex sounds hot.. lol
Keep it up
Peace
 
#12
haha yeah she was pretty hot...glad u saw the humour in this one :p

thanks for the feedback man....gotta love those horny poems haha

peace.
 

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