at least I tried

#1
Aiyyo, I dare you, to pair two
emcees that compare to
one of me I thought you knew
say a prayer fool
it’s all over like a senior in high school
battle me, don’t even try to
goodbye tool
you ain’t fuckin knowin
my rhyme’s forever goin
clever flowin, but never showin
my full capabilities
...ease up off the trees
listen up, and maybe you’ll see
you need a degree
...from the nice emcee
that’s yours truly
whores screw me, then sue me
...just take some jewelry
and stop doin me in
for my cheddar
i’m a money go-getter
better pack that beretta
...when you see my crew
they don’t play by the rules
so my team don't ever lose
...and I’m the number one cat
in this money for raps trap
it’s sad, but life is bullcrap
...“cash rules” still apply
and with that I’d be wise
to say all my goodbyes
...at least I gave it a try
 
#2
Sounds like some amateur freestlye shit - which isn't necassarily a bad thing as everyone's got to start somewhere.

Get a few coherent verses together so you can really showcase what skills you may or not have because I find it hard to make a constructive comment on this type of rhyming.
 

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