Blaaaah..

[tHuG $TyLe]

Lay spittin pain and illicit shit like slittin wrists/
mc's in throwback jerseys..but they aint hittin bricks/
Devilish incisions tattooed with knives the size of hockey sticks/
Twisted shit like Twist3d's shit its not even close to just sick/
Exhausting minded a lyrical tyrant handling mc extortions/
causes Lay to kill the youth like forcing chicks for abortions/
sell the fetus on auctions with the remains of the torso/
Polish the body like Warsaw a new meaning of floor show/
got more dough..shock hearts like a triple bypass condition/
use surgical tools to give myself organs against permission/

:thumb: :fury:

 

[SiGh]

Devilish incisions tattooed with knives the size of hockey sticks/
Twisted shit like Twist3d's shit its not even close to just sick/

dope rhyme. :fury: love those lines :fury:
keep it goin thuggie.

 

[ArtsyGirl]

My favourite part:

Exhausting minded a lyrical tyrant handling mc extortions/
causes Lay to kill the youth like forcing chicks for abortions/
sell the fetus on auctions with the remains of the torso/
Polish the body like Warsaw a new meaning of floor show/

But really the whole thing flowed nice n nasty, Dope.

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

thank ya..

btw its my rhyme from Gworld..im called Lil Lay there so hence me reffering to myself as Lay.

:thumb:

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

I shouldve renamed this "50 cent diss" to get more replies lol.

anyway repped if u give feedback.

 

[SiGh]

lol trust me, now that you put that ull REP the people that comment. i can guarantee you 6 names of the top of my head.

i love dat line bout the preteen chest. cant remember how the rest goes. dat diss killt em.

 

[bigmack]

good stuff man.flow is real smooth. A+

I shouldve renamed this "50 cent diss" to get more replies lol.

an

lmao,true

 

[Synful*Luv]

Sigh put me up on this and it's tight, i like it, I had to reread it like 3 times to get the full meaning, but it's decent, and it flowed really well throughout the entire peice, it wasn't choppy like some peices are.

Nice :thumb:

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

Thanks ya both..

repped.

 

[CESARE BORGIA]

Tight shit, me and you need to get a battle going, TOPIC: Most demented rymes

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

yeah we should. Thanks for feedback

 

[CESARE BORGIA]

no doubt man, i like givin feedback.

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

Thanks, get at me for the battle.

 

[struggle01]

smooth flow dope rhymes that was nasty. cant even quote a line the whole verse was nice. Liked the way it started out hard got the attention rite away with slittin wrists.

 

[ImmortalTech]

... i think I was dead while u were dropping these peices in here man. Your peices are far better than any other peices I've read on here including mine. Keep it going man, and get ur ass in the studio and do something for real, so I get some more dope shit to put in my cd player.

~peace