Coco

#1
Never hurts to try.

Coco

I met this woman, a white girl named Coco, beautiful
She made you do things that you had never used to do
Some guys would holla at Mary, quite the contrary
Coco was the one for me, a beauty I’d seen rarely
She changed my life and made me like a demon child
Taught me how to be a player and lay different kinds of women down
Her skin is as white as a cloud, with eyes as light as dew
She’s jealous, so when I’m with the fellas, I lie and hide the truth
Her smell is intoxicating, I inhale and she leaves me breathless
I know she’s bad for me, a glutton for punishment, I have a death wish
I can’t function without her, it’s like I’m a fiend
The unprotected sex is a hex and a blessing to me
Yet she stresses me and stretches me endlessly, it’s infuriating
She was drifting, so to fix the rift, we started dating
Exclusively, the excuses became futile and fruitless
Insinuations increased, presumptions progressed, the intimate instances grew less
Sometimes I’d find her on the street, flirting with other men
I get envious and angry, but then she makes me fell whole again
I cry at night because I can’t let go and when I try
I become useless and it’s useless to resist so we reconcile
And I give in, shaking and shivering in the basement
It’s cold without her warmth, living in a world that’s faceless
Much more than a love/hate, trying to gather as much faith as I can
Because a man’s fate is only controlled when he’s in one state
One night, I told her it was over, no more dependence
And she said this “you need me more than I need you, to leave me would be senseless”
So I stuck around, she fucked around, I’m waiting for her at home
Only accepting this situation ‘cause I’m afraid to be alone
And I stay within my zone, insane inside my dome
Shackled by your eyes, destroyed by this craving in my soul
This is why I’m writing a letter out, trapped in confinement
I’m truly asking for help, I’m dying inside quick
If aid never arrives, then I leave existence with this
Teach your kids never to get addicted to the Women of Bliss
 

Synful*Luv

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#2
Damn, liked this one a lot. How long did it take you to come up with this one? Rhyme scheme was very nice.

Try to watch out for spelling error next time. It can give the poem an entire different meaning to those who don't know any better.
 

The.Menace

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#4
Reply to 3 poems before posting a new poem. So far you did 2 replys. 48 hours to reply to a couple of other poems before I close this.
 

Elmira

Well-Known Member
#6
This poem really resonates.

I was in said state, said frame of mind not too long ago. After a while I couldn't see where I ended and he began anymore. I'm sure there are people out there who find such things exhilariting, and get a thrill out of it. But honestly I'd lost myself completely, and knew I had to let go. So yeah I've been there and know how you're feeling and really don't want to go back ever.
 

Kadafi Son

Well-Known Member
#7
Damn!!! I loved this one. Real tight rhymin' and lessonz were bein taught. If you'd rap this poem, I know it would be tight. Nice man

(You real lucky. U got multiply replies after 1-2 days. I envy you....juz playin')
 

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