Criminal Minded...

#1
This is a verse from a song I wrote... Check it out... :thumb:

Certain people tend to think feeble/They think their words speak louder then their actions and they do shit thats illegal/ thinkin all their worth is a nickel and they resort to using the des eagle/ but what they dont realize is that their mind is better then that, better then using needles/ better then using gats and robbing the unfortunate people/ im not preaching/ just kickin knoweldge while other cats are low blowing like deamon deacons/ listen to me while im speakin/ cus what im saying is uplifting while your face is leakin and bleedin and your barely even breathin/one more word and you might give dunny a reason/life is too short like jada said on new york/ so move carefully cus in reality you need your brain and your heart to have the right kind of mentality...
 
#2
Like your other piece, some of your lines are extremely long. Try to break them up into smaller bars. This ain't as good as your other drop, "Twisted".
 

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