Ahh, it feels good to be back on the PacBoard, is been 2 long...and i always found that site offered the realest feedback on my poetry back in the day. Here's my latest...
Everything I Hear
Everything I Hear,
Goes in 1 ear,
And out the other,
It's prolly, naw most likely, the reason I bring pain 2 my mother,
Reasons for her stress, used 2 say that 1 day ill be changed,
Who am I kidding, all the thought's housed in my brain, are deranged,
Im crazed, I cant even look at the world straight,
Said it in one of my first rhymes, Death, is my only promised fate,
Tried to live righteously, but realised quickly, it wasnt meant for me,
Stayed distant from people, then I would wonder why they didnt like me for me,
Everything I did, is the reason I am the way I am today,
Felt lost, so I started down on a path that lead me to an even worse way
Then the route I was travellin on before,
If that was Hell, then this is something much worse for sure,
Its funny how I can be so loud and obnoxious,
Yet to almost to everything around me, Im oblivious;
The worst part, is that I wanna be someone other's hear,
But its quite obvious, like how I do, it jus goes in 1 ear, and out the other ear.
Everything I Hear
Everything I Hear,
Goes in 1 ear,
And out the other,
It's prolly, naw most likely, the reason I bring pain 2 my mother,
Reasons for her stress, used 2 say that 1 day ill be changed,
Who am I kidding, all the thought's housed in my brain, are deranged,
Im crazed, I cant even look at the world straight,
Said it in one of my first rhymes, Death, is my only promised fate,
Tried to live righteously, but realised quickly, it wasnt meant for me,
Stayed distant from people, then I would wonder why they didnt like me for me,
Everything I did, is the reason I am the way I am today,
Felt lost, so I started down on a path that lead me to an even worse way
Then the route I was travellin on before,
If that was Hell, then this is something much worse for sure,
Its funny how I can be so loud and obnoxious,
Yet to almost to everything around me, Im oblivious;
The worst part, is that I wanna be someone other's hear,
But its quite obvious, like how I do, it jus goes in 1 ear, and out the other ear.
