first freestyle

[2pacakamakaveli]

just a lil freestyle. i know it ain't that good but i'm trying
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you forgot your gun

now you gotta run

u didn't wanna hide no more on the block

and now your bitch ass just got shot

watcha gonna do now, you don't know

call the po po, fuck no

dead or jail, what should i choose

at least in jail i can get out on bail

but if i get out, they gonna shoot me again

so i choose death instead of the pen

 

[Hennessy]

cool cool....like u said, it isn't anything amazin, but props for tryin. Keep writing too, only way you'll get better.