first shit ive written need some feedback please
just started getting into this recently...got reason with a few friends...lemme know wat u think if u dont mind...wrote it for someone else also btw.......
On my block lifes just the same shit different day
Mommas working jobs and says daddys away
School dont matter cuz i cant afford no college
So im off to sell whateva to some fool who aint in college
One thing about my block is that all ni**as is the same
Livin the same life man that shit dont ever change
Always looking for an avenue any way to make some money
I gotta look fly and maybe buy something for the honey
Its a shame we gotta live like this everything being so hard
And u know the blue and white always lookin to throw someone behind bars/
Man the only thing I know thats po' po' is just about all the people in my hood/
THat shit always forces us to be up to no good
Dawg Im tired of this like Brad is tired of Jennifer
Seems like forever now I've been sleeping on the fucked up furniture
But we cant replace nothin since we aint got no dough
Next thing I know mommas finna be on the street as some hoe
I cant stop her since I do shit thats just as bad
Aint nobody else who gonna since I aint got no dad
Whateva she do as long it bring in money I'm straight
So look at my life and yours then tell me what you hate
just started getting into this recently...got reason with a few friends...lemme know wat u think if u dont mind...wrote it for someone else also btw.......
On my block lifes just the same shit different day
Mommas working jobs and says daddys away
School dont matter cuz i cant afford no college
So im off to sell whateva to some fool who aint in college
One thing about my block is that all ni**as is the same
Livin the same life man that shit dont ever change
Always looking for an avenue any way to make some money
I gotta look fly and maybe buy something for the honey
Its a shame we gotta live like this everything being so hard
And u know the blue and white always lookin to throw someone behind bars/
Man the only thing I know thats po' po' is just about all the people in my hood/
THat shit always forces us to be up to no good
Dawg Im tired of this like Brad is tired of Jennifer
Seems like forever now I've been sleeping on the fucked up furniture
But we cant replace nothin since we aint got no dough
Next thing I know mommas finna be on the street as some hoe
I cant stop her since I do shit thats just as bad
Aint nobody else who gonna since I aint got no dad
Whateva she do as long it bring in money I'm straight
So look at my life and yours then tell me what you hate