Freestyle hollah at your boy

[DollahBillz]

me- Hey Ur Boy Just Stepped In The Game And I'm Ready 4 Anything That Comes My Way/
I Don't Beleive In Puttin' Prices On Certian People's Heads I Just Run Up On Umh And Put The Burnnuah To They Head/
Best Beleive Ur Boys Gonnuah Leave'em Dead/
Like Ti I'm Serious About Makin' This Bread /
So Pay Attchen Closely Cause I'll Leave U Filled Up Wit Lead/
Its My Time To Shine So Let Me Go On Ahead/
Boyz And Gurlz I Know U Down Wit Makin' This Bread/
U Wanna Help Ur Family But Most Of Yawl Too Dumb In Ahead/
Too Figure Out That The King Of This Site Should Be That Nicca Infah_redd/
I Know Yawl Gonnah Say Take Off The Caps Lock Make Uah Complaint And Start A Fire Like Match Box/
Thats Okay Cause I Got A Flow U Can't Nock/
Thats The Reason Ur Boy Got On His Caps Locks/
Kuz I Mean What I Say And Thats The Only Way To Express It/
Whats Lower Case Gonnuah Do But Just Piss Me Off/
Cause I Like To Be Seen And Ur Boy Aint Soft/
..........................................................."what!"
U Think Ur Boy Fell Off Naw I Was Takin' A Break So I Can Put This Rap Game On Pause/
I Got Yawl By The Jaws Like I Was Teachin' A Pit To Lock Jaw/
Pop Pop Their Go The Sound Of My Glock Yawl Mack-10 Said Is U Banggin' Or Can U Ball/
I Choose Banggin' Cause U Can Tell I Can Ball All I Got To Do Is Want It And I'll Be All Over The Wallz/
Wonce The Hoez Read My Shit They Be All On My Bawlz'/
Take Them To The Room And Bang Out They Wallz/
Come Back Another Day And The Fellahz Would Be Oooh My God Thats My Dawg/
So Let Me Teach U Uah Lesson About Fuckin With Me Neveuah Disrespect Me Or The Gurlz That Be All On My Team/
And Don't Battle Me Unless U Know What Ur Gonnuah Get In To/
Cause If I'm Not Down U Know Uah??? I'muah Get In U!.

 

[Confucius87]

To be truthful, I'd give that a 3 out of 10. Some of the words, you rhymed more than once (you each used 'bread' and 'ahead' twice). And to me, you're vocabulary seemed kinda 'elementary'. It sounded like something a 12 year old would write. At some points, you're lyrics flowed, great. But at others, they were very off point. But then again, this was only a freestyle.

*Next time you make a thread in Show Ya' Flow, you have to reply to 3 other threads, first.

 

[Shot 21]

Pretty weak but hey its only a freestyle. Im no good at freestyles either.