gates of heaven

#1
wow , been a long while ...

Gates Of Heaven

Verse 1

Open the window , let the summer slumber in/
What I desire - to remember what a wonder is/
The unspeakable & the eldest of dreams/
The eternity - the tales of the screams/
I fail to believe in the scale of the scenes/
In the way to succeed through this daily routine/
It's way too obscene - life has not much to gain/
For this entity is to live in grudge & shame/
It's ment to be , that's why I clutch the pain/
It doesn't touch me anymore - I grow though in strain/
Gone is my resistance when I think of world's tears/
Of the ancestors before is , the billions of years/
Fill in the fears that bind us to a life of stress/
Blinded from birth , just to find a mess/
The day we open up our eyes , we embrace the devil/
Or see angels smilin' at the gates of heaven/

hook

Verse 2

Passing by , venture city streets/
This late in the evening - people swiftly meet/
Sun's yet to set - I see tears & regret/
Recognise hatred through the cheers that I get/
Chattering , chanting - there is no peace/
Disputes amongst eachother , never shall they cease/
And the beefs , have the streets swept empty/
Rememberin' mischiefs & it's hard cuz tempt me/
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Shot 21

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#2
Whoa! Thats some deep shit! Hot lyrics man Im feelin you.

Sun's yet to set - I see tears & regret/
Recognise hatred through the cheers that I get/

Sicc
 
#3
Pain Of Depth said:
wow , been a long while ...
Verse 2

Passing by , venture city streets/
This late in the evening - people swiftly meet/
Sun's yet to set - I see tears & regret/
Recognise hatred through the cheers that I get/
Chattering , chanting - there is no peace/
Disputes amongst eachother , never shall they cease/
And the beefs , have the streets swept empty/
Rememberin' mischiefs & it's hard cuz tempt me/
...
good piece, only thing I could say is to finish the piece....maybe add/drop some words here and there...ohther than that..good 7/10
 

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