Jah vs Masta247
- Thread starter Tha_Wood
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been a loooong time....
Let the masta-know i'll grasp-his-throat and gladly bust-his-spleen //
challenge me? must be a dream, its men here, ur Just-a-teen //
In your first battle you'll be mangled - so what could this rookie really do-to-me //
a useless whore, all hes gud for is Signature links to Asian nudity //
The only way this kid could win was if the vote was rigged //
talks big --
After this your only smile will be your sig //
so calmly, like oragami you need to "know when to fold" //
See masta grab "the white flag" cos Im "on top of this Pole //
Unwanted ---
You're like "Competition Winner mail" you've got so many "Bullshit Posts" //
no joke, when we're done you'll have more blog entries than fuckin votes //
This boys first language aint even english so how the hell could this be fair //
humiliated and degraded, and ive got 4 bars to spare //
Let the masta-know i'll grasp-his-throat and gladly bust-his-spleen //
challenge me? must be a dream, its men here, ur Just-a-teen //
In your first battle you'll be mangled - so what could this rookie really do-to-me //
a useless whore, all hes gud for is Signature links to Asian nudity //
The only way this kid could win was if the vote was rigged //
talks big --
After this your only smile will be your sig //
so calmly, like oragami you need to "know when to fold" //
See masta grab "the white flag" cos Im "on top of this Pole //
Unwanted ---
You're like "Competition Winner mail" you've got so many "Bullshit Posts" //
no joke, when we're done you'll have more blog entries than fuckin votes //
This boys first language aint even english so how the hell could this be fair //
humiliated and degraded, and ive got 4 bars to spare //
Jah, you think you're God? I don't think so//
God doesn't die, you will so pay attention//
slaying you with rhymes is now my only mission//
Masta can erase you not touching his pistol//
...
that was just an intro to let you know who's going down//
Jah you simply suck, run away you fucking clown//
If you want to see how much I rox, I'm cool and sexy//
take your Streethop post count and multiply it by.. 80//
that's me - Masta, gangsta mofo legend 24/7//
you're Jah, so don't even dream about heaven//
not only I post wiser but I also write faster//
I blast 5 posts a minute while eating pasta//
it's a disaster - I just slayed you and you don't want more//
bastard, I'm multilingual and I think I hear you yelling "zomgzor"!//
God doesn't die, you will so pay attention//
slaying you with rhymes is now my only mission//
Masta can erase you not touching his pistol//
...
that was just an intro to let you know who's going down//
Jah you simply suck, run away you fucking clown//
If you want to see how much I rox, I'm cool and sexy//
take your Streethop post count and multiply it by.. 80//
that's me - Masta, gangsta mofo legend 24/7//
you're Jah, so don't even dream about heaven//
not only I post wiser but I also write faster//
I blast 5 posts a minute while eating pasta//
it's a disaster - I just slayed you and you don't want more//
bastard, I'm multilingual and I think I hear you yelling "zomgzor"!//
Let the masta-know i'll grasp-his-throat and gladly bust-his-spleen //
challenge me? must be a dream, its men here, ur Just-a-teen //
nice flow and rhyme but first ok punch came in the second line 0.5/2
In your first battle you'll be mangled - so what could this rookie really do-to-me //
a useless whore, all hes gud for is Signature links to Asian nudity //
^second lines pretty nice, first was a decent filler...1/2
The only way this kid could win was if the vote was rigged //
talks big --
After this your only smile will be your sig //
decent first line, nic switch for the second...1.5/2
so calmly, like oragami you need to "know when to fold" //
See masta grab "the white flag" cos Im "on top of this Pole //
nice...both lines work well....2/2
Unwanted ---
You're like "Competition Winner mail" you've got so many "Bullshit Posts" //
no joke, when we're done you'll have more blog entries than fuckin votes //
hmmm flow off a little bit, lines are ok, half point for each...1/2...
This boys first language aint even english so how the hell could this be fair //
humiliated and degraded, and ive got 4 bars to spare //
ended nicely enough...1/2
OVERALL: 7/12
Good verse which started slowly and got better as it went on...
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Jah, you think you're God? I don't think so//
God doesn't die, you will so pay attention//
.........0/2
slaying you with rhymes is now my only mission//
Masta can erase you not touching his pistol//
...
.........0/2
that was just an intro to let you know who's going down//
Jah you simply suck, run away you fucking clown//
the first 4 lines literally had nothing to talk about...at least the top line explains that was an intro...second lines nothing really....0.5/2
If you want to see how much I rox, I'm cool and sexy//
take your Streethop post count and multiply it by.. 80//
kinda made me laugh so ill give you a point for the second line....1/2
that's me - Masta, gangsta mofo legend 24/7//
you're Jah, so don't even dream about heaven//
nothing first line...second is vaguely acceptable...0.5/2
not only I post wiser but I also write faster//
I blast 5 posts a minute while eating pasta//
again second line made me laugh...this is a horrible verse but 0.5/2 for humour...
it's a disaster - I just slayed you and you don't want more//
bastard, I'm multilingual and I think I hear you yelling "zomgzor"!//
^same as above....0.5/2
OVERALL 3/14
Basically Im not sure how seriously you were writing but its obvious you were looking for some laughs and it was a fun verse for sure...too many lines with no real content...a couple didnt really rhyme at all...no multis (though theyre not essential) and flow was ok for the most part...lm sure thingsll improve when youve practiced more...
WINNER: ELIJAH.
challenge me? must be a dream, its men here, ur Just-a-teen //
nice flow and rhyme but first ok punch came in the second line 0.5/2
In your first battle you'll be mangled - so what could this rookie really do-to-me //
a useless whore, all hes gud for is Signature links to Asian nudity //
^second lines pretty nice, first was a decent filler...1/2
The only way this kid could win was if the vote was rigged //
talks big --
After this your only smile will be your sig //
decent first line, nic switch for the second...1.5/2
so calmly, like oragami you need to "know when to fold" //
See masta grab "the white flag" cos Im "on top of this Pole //
nice...both lines work well....2/2
Unwanted ---
You're like "Competition Winner mail" you've got so many "Bullshit Posts" //
no joke, when we're done you'll have more blog entries than fuckin votes //
hmmm flow off a little bit, lines are ok, half point for each...1/2...
This boys first language aint even english so how the hell could this be fair //
humiliated and degraded, and ive got 4 bars to spare //
ended nicely enough...1/2
OVERALL: 7/12
Good verse which started slowly and got better as it went on...
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Jah, you think you're God? I don't think so//
God doesn't die, you will so pay attention//
.........0/2
slaying you with rhymes is now my only mission//
Masta can erase you not touching his pistol//
...
.........0/2
that was just an intro to let you know who's going down//
Jah you simply suck, run away you fucking clown//
the first 4 lines literally had nothing to talk about...at least the top line explains that was an intro...second lines nothing really....0.5/2
If you want to see how much I rox, I'm cool and sexy//
take your Streethop post count and multiply it by.. 80//
kinda made me laugh so ill give you a point for the second line....1/2
that's me - Masta, gangsta mofo legend 24/7//
you're Jah, so don't even dream about heaven//
nothing first line...second is vaguely acceptable...0.5/2
not only I post wiser but I also write faster//
I blast 5 posts a minute while eating pasta//
again second line made me laugh...this is a horrible verse but 0.5/2 for humour...
it's a disaster - I just slayed you and you don't want more//
bastard, I'm multilingual and I think I hear you yelling "zomgzor"!//
^same as above....0.5/2
OVERALL 3/14
Basically Im not sure how seriously you were writing but its obvious you were looking for some laughs and it was a fun verse for sure...too many lines with no real content...a couple didnt really rhyme at all...no multis (though theyre not essential) and flow was ok for the most part...lm sure thingsll improve when youve practiced more...
WINNER: ELIJAH.
The only way this kid could win was if the vote was rigged //
talks big --
After this your only smile will be your sig //
so calmly, like oragami you need to "know when to fold" //
See masta grab "the white flag" cos Im "on top of this Pole //
This boys first language aint even english so how the hell could this be fair //
humiliated and degraded, and ive got 4 bars to spare //
vs.
that's me - Masta, gangsta mofo legend 24/7//
you're Jah, so don't even dream about heaven//
i quoted my favorite lines from the verses, i think Jah won this pretty easily, he was more complex, had better wordplay too, punchlines were more creative
vote- elijah
talks big --
After this your only smile will be your sig //
so calmly, like oragami you need to "know when to fold" //
See masta grab "the white flag" cos Im "on top of this Pole //
This boys first language aint even english so how the hell could this be fair //
humiliated and degraded, and ive got 4 bars to spare //
vs.
that's me - Masta, gangsta mofo legend 24/7//
you're Jah, so don't even dream about heaven//
i quoted my favorite lines from the verses, i think Jah won this pretty easily, he was more complex, had better wordplay too, punchlines were more creative
vote- elijah