Joy 1-100

#1
Joy 1-100 27 December 2006

this is an amalgamation of everything since the 'beginning' of time
predetermined? -everything has an algorithm.. this includes life
..and whether this is 'divine' is simply irrelevant..
-because time is circular in terms of where we're headed
birth and death are equal polar opposites -based on your perspective
and whether the time between them is sped-up is completely relative
-instead of worrying about slowing it down, you need to consider
the joy and pain lived by a 1 year old infant is not specific
..to him -it's equal in relativity to a 100 year old
i know its hard not to fear & wonder about your body turning cold
-and i suppose its odd, but from your perspective -it never will
..the person that you make love to, and the one you could kill
could be the same exact opposites from someone else's point of view
therefore good and evil can't exist -its your minds illusion
this is why life can seem elusive, and why some say its evasive
-but dualities in life appear that way because we're all the same..
..you can't escape it.. because you can't exist without everything else
-right down to the smallest molecule -were all connected, there is no self.

hey guys, havn't been online in fuckin aaages!....so thought id hit u guys up with a new one.....feedback appreciated :)

peace
 

Jurhum

Well-Known Member
#2
welcome back. yeh i haven't been to this section for a while.. anyway, good drop. i really enjoyed it through out.

good seeing you here man
 

Kadafi Son

Well-Known Member
#3
Damn. I hope my reply can be direct as I feel about ya poem. Eh, Birth & Death...Makin' Love & Makin' Murda?! Opposite Poles?! Dat was some deep eerie azz shit. I'm feelin' this cuz lately I've been worried about wat happens to my body & soul when I die. Touchin poem. Didn't even have to rhyme. Loved it...Peace
 

ArtsyGirl

Well-Known Member
#4
Found the first few lines tough to read but after that I was hooked, couldnt not finish reading this one! Good job. Specially liked the infant line and the person you love or could kill part.. Nice one.
 
#5
Kadafi Son said:
Damn. I hope my reply can be direct as I feel about ya poem. Eh, Birth & Death...Makin' Love & Makin' Murda?! Opposite Poles?! Dat was some deep eerie azz shit. I'm feelin' this cuz lately I've been worried about wat happens to my body & soul when I die. Touchin poem. Didn't even have to rhyme. Loved it...Peace
hey man, that means a lot to me... its really good to see you got the whole idea behind this peice... really glad i could give you some perspective on things man..

peace!
 
#6
Jurhum said:
welcome back. yeh i haven't been to this section for a while.. anyway, good drop. i really enjoyed it through out.

good seeing you here man
thanks man, good to see you back on here too....thanks for peepin man

peace.
 
#7
artisticgurl said:
Found the first few lines tough to read but after that I was hooked, couldnt not finish reading this one! Good job. Specially liked the infant line and the person you love or could kill part.. Nice one.
:) thanks heaps!... yeah the rhyme scheme on this one wasnt that important to me....it was more the theme of it i was focusing on...

thanks for peepin

peace!
 
#8
you see everyone, we need more poems like this one right here, i mean fuck, these are one these poems where after u finish it u start to think about it, it just makes u wonder maybe, well kman nice poem and please,,more poems like this one!!!!!! keep it up maaaaayn
 
#9
assassin_4001 said:
you see everyone, we need more poems like this one right here, i mean fuck, these are one these poems where after u finish it u start to think about it, it just makes u wonder maybe, well kman nice poem and please,,more poems like this one!!!!!! keep it up maaaaayn
thanks heaps man...you really made my day with this reply :)... really nice to hear people enjoying this peice as much as me..

thanks again man

peace!
 

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