MATW95's First Drop on 2PacBoard

[MATW95]

I've been writing for over 5 years about shit I see and shit I experience, and I just wanted to share something I wrote about 2 years ago when I was kinda trying to "find" myself. So without further adieu, here's MATW95's first shared poem on 2PacBoard:

Oh Lord save my soul, somebody pray for me
Reach your hand out, grip mine, and show a better way for me
Don't wanna go along the path and turn out like my father
Beating and cheating on my wife while neglecting my daughter
Money tore my family apart and made us start to suffer
So I'm feeling cold my heart is stone, edges grown rougher
I know there's something in there, we're all human inside
But where my soul resides, it's hard to find...I need a guide
To show me righteousness and take me off these sedatives
Cuz I'm better than that, but when I progress, I'm headed right back

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

I'm feelin this, its tight, quick n the flow holds it down... nice 1st drop..

BUT chances r this is gona get closed unless u reply 2 3 poems... rules are 3 replies 4 1 drop... just thought id save u the whole closing down ish..

n e ways keep it up.

pz

 

[MATW95]

I'm feelin this, its tight, quick n the flow holds it down... nice 1st drop..

BUT chances r this is gona get closed unless u reply 2 3 poems... rules are 3 replies 4 1 drop... just thought id save u the whole closing down ish..

n e ways keep it up.

pz

Oh, didn't know about that rule.
Thanks homey :thumb:

 

[assassin_4001]

wow,,,definatly a good piece......you should definatly post more poems ,, i really like it,,,,,,,nice flow and everything,,,wished it was longer though,,,,but all in all,,,,fantastic,,,,,,,,keep em coming my man.....

 

[Kadafi Son]

I have to give you propz on that. I'm really feelin dat cuz I could relate to it. I'd like to read more poems from you. Peace!

 

[kman_69]

had to check this one out too....definetly a nice drop!...really feelin this one too!...

 

[~live2tell~]

I've been writing for over 5 years about shit I see and shit I experience, and I just wanted to share something I wrote about 2 years ago when I was kinda trying to "find" myself. So without further adieu, here's MATW95's first shared poem on 2PacBoard:

Oh Lord save my soul, somebody pray for me
Reach your hand out, grip mine, and show a better way for me
Don't wanna go along the path and turn out like my father
Beating and cheating on my wife while neglecting my daughter
Money tore my family apart and made us start to suffer
So I'm feeling cold my heart is stone, edges grown rougher
I know there's something in there, we're all human inside
But where my soul resides, it's hard to find...I need a guide
To show me righteousness and take me off these sedatives
Cuz I'm better than that, but when I progress, I'm headed right back

Like this alot, parts I can relate to, flow was really good something I could feel you know. Keep them coming!

 

[The.Menace]

nice lil piece. I like the rhymes and I know the feeling, when you're lost.

 

[True Thugz]

The poem itself is good. I liked it a lot. Only thing that bothers me is how good the poem is and your age. You been writing for over five years (thats kool) and your only four-teen and you wrote this two years ago, which would have made you twelve at the time.

The quality of the poem and your age don't add up to me. Maybe your a modern day Shakespere? Maybe.

I don't wanna bring ya down in anyway. But if this ain't your work it's best to be honest. People on the other side of a computer won't kill ya if ya do, I would actually respect you if you came out with the truth.

If I'm totally off, than I apologise.

Holla back

 

[MATW95]

This is me man. I've been told that I can't write this kinda stuff because of my age, but to be completely honest, I still don't think I've written something good enough to really meet the standards of "great" yet. The fact that you think it's not me is actually the biggest compliment I could get, so thanks alot man :thumb:

 

[True Thugz]

^^Sweet as man. Had to check

Keep up the good work.