My first ever poem

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believe it or not i've never written a poem (well maybe in english at school years ago once or twice), but really this is my first go so go easy on me.. it goes out to a girl that wont trust me because her friends despise me (for no reason), i never did anythin to abuse her trust but said some hurtful things to her when she told me things wont work at the moment n yehh thats the background behind this.. you may notice a little 2pac-influence coming thru as well, i sent this to her in the post 2 nights ago.. lemme know what u think :thumb:

Dear L******

I know you can’t trust me, and I know you think I lie
I just wish I got the chance 2 show you my true side
These people I don’t know, they tell you im a sleeze
Out of everything I don’t want you to think this, all I can say is please!
The night i first saw you when we finally stopped and met
I knew straight away, that you would be hard to forget
I finally got the nerve 2 come over and say hi
And I got your number D**** got it for me, cos I was 2 shy
You probably think my feelings and actions were fake that I use on every girl
But that’s so wrong L****** if you gave me an inch, id give you the world
And yeh I feel pretty stupid, writing 2 u how I feel
I just want to promise u that every word is real
I can’t put into words how sorry I am for what I said
I didn’t mean it and hope you can think of the good times we had instead
I can’t even imagine the pain *** has put you through
And it sux after getting to know me, you think I could be like that 2
I want you to know and by this I promise and swear
That if you ever need anyone for support or help I’ll always be there
And atleast I can say I know I gave my all
I can only be true to myself cos that way I can’t fall
It’s true that the sun always comes after the dark
So you will always be in my heart
… For forgiveness, where do I start!!
 
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