My sex poem [caution explict]

[2pac4prez2006]

hi, this is my poem, and its quite explict, so if your easily offended by sexual content explict lyrics i would advise you not to continue reading this poem thank you

 

[2pac4prez2006]

you can pretty much guess what its about :thumb: :

this is it, u got me in my room thinkin of masterbating
wanna have sex with u, but cant stay patient
wanted 2 say ur so god damn sexy and fine
i jus hope that were masterbating at the same time
wish my fingers were ur's, and ur fingers were mine
having sex 2getha, like were one of a kind
ur so horny and temptin am loosin my mind
were so alike, were gonna come at the same time
u sed u would like to see me all hot and sweaty
I’d be making u sweaty baby, if u only jus let me
I got my hand’s through your hair, you got ur hand on my crotch
my hands are playing in your back pocket. While ur touching my cock
im gently kissing your kneck, saying we got plenty of time left
u look at me madly and demand sum hard rough sex
u wanna get undressed now so that I can see you naked,
u seem 2 look a little panicked, but baby I say ‘ we can make it’
this is that real shit I tell you, no need to be faking
u see I work out, so u know the back wall will be shaking…
u’ll be screaming sum bad, ppl think u were getting hit
we be looking so good we should make it a porno flick
your looking all red and heated, dripping with sweat
ur screaming with relief but we aint finished yet
am thrusting into you, your body’s shaking in joy
am wearing a rubber, I don’t want a baby boy!
this is it you grab and scratch me and scream
your last words were ‘shit, this is a fucking dream’
this is it you’ve came, I come 20 seconds after
we both dripping with sweat, smiling with laughter
were over, popped broken and finshed
its our 1st time, we only lasted 19 minutes
but theres 1 thing I should say before I keep you waitin
I wouldn’t fuck with me, am mental escape patient!

 

[Zero Cool]

Unedit it, it'll give it more impact :thumb:

 

[2pac4prez2006]

Unedit it, it'll give it more impact :thumb:

ok jus i only been here 4 days and didnt want 2 get banned over this lol

 

[The.Menace]

NO I think it's a good idea to say if a poem is explict. Anyway, some lines I didn't like from a lyrical point of view, like u repeat yourself a couple of times but I had a wide smile on my face while readin this so....

 

[Stranger]

Wow that wasnt too good, Im glad my fantasy's etc etc are better than that, those explicit words would make my cock limp.

And the style seemed to be more of a song/rap than a nice read/layed out poem.

 

[2pac4prez2006]

Wow that wasnt too good, Im glad my fantasy's etc etc are better than that, those explicit words would make my cock limp.

And the style seemed to be more of a song/rap than a nice read/layed out poem.

sorry where should i have posted it?

 

[jaimie.uk fan]

you are a naughty boy !!! what the hell made you think that up ??

 

[TG1 Ghetto One]

ha ha lol i mus say that was a funny poem props

 

[porn_king]

edit: sum good shit homie

 

[~live2tell~]

I thought it was pretty good, I prefer the start to the end I just thought it better content wise at the beginning. Some of the rhyming seemed a lil forced towards the end, it was good though and definitely a lil different.

 

[kman_69]

haha nice, this was even dirtier than my peice

 

[kman_69]

nice drop tho...feelin it

nice flow!

 

[shattered dreams]

the end is really kind of twisted in this poem..but i still liked it none the less

favorite line was
am thrusting into you, your body’s shaking in joy
am wearing a rubber, I don’t want a baby boy!

 

[Belo]

Made me laugh.. some horny ass poems on here lately..
Wasn't too explicit in a bad way or anything
I thought it was pretty good.. the flow wasn't exactly spot on, something you could work on but overall a cool poem
Keep writin man
Peace

 

[Beautiful Angel]

It was alright, had a decent flow...kept me wondering what you were going to say next...i didn't like the last line tho kinda ruined it for me....keep up the good work

*Kel*

 

[KiRsTyBoO]

hey, this was a good read, an interesting piece
never really read anything like this before so it was different
different in a good way, kinda lost it at the end, esp the last line
but it obviuosly means summit to u, so not to knock it.

nice, keep it up

xXxXx

 

[True Thugz]

It is funny. The start especially had me laughing.

Keep it up wanker :thumb:

 

[Kadafi Son]

I got mixed feelinz about this piece. It was funny in a way but then I don't think you tried your best on this. Don't get me wrong, it kept me entertained, especially at the end. Just do a little bit of editing and this poem would be better than average. Peace

 

[Bender]

I would call it 'Erotic Fiction', rather than explicit.

But all the same, a very imaginative piece. V.Good.