Pause

[Synful*Luv]

Oh my God, I haven't written any poetry since, the beginning of HS. This was driven by a situation i'm currently in and was done from pure emotion. Not sure how good it's going to be. However, after The.Menace convinved me to come back to read, I figured perhaps i'd share as well. This is the first piece I've shared with anyone since I started writing poetry again.

Here goes.

[highlight]PAUSE[/highlight]

Pause

For a brief second to agglomerate your thoughts

Laconically

I shall reveal what i'd previously brought to naught

Inhale

and aspire to not become distraught

Hold

your breath and embrace the aught

Feel

ing of how erroneous it seems

Realize

through it all I am nigh in time to you..&

no matter what, I shall always and forever be

the One

who loves & approbates you,

At

this moment as well as eternally

Supposing

you can not pause for self

Then

My Love

if you can

Please

this is the

Kairos

attempt to

Pause

for Me

 

[Kadafi Son]

Hey this is a tight poem from u. I like how u worded this piece, where a certain word ran into tha next line. Actually, it was like "pausing" after everyline. Thats a real creative concept right there. Gotta give ya propz on this one. Where u been at? U should be in here mo'. 4real

peace...

 

[*Riaz*]

Thanx for this....I Like it

 

[The.Menace]

Intersting, very different then what I usually do - and I don't know yet what to think, just want to let you know I read it.

 

[Synful*Luv]

It's different from what I usually do as well. I wanted to try a new concept and see how it was received. I haven't written anything in awhile, so I figured I should come back and switch my style up a bit.

 

[ArtsyGirl]

Yeah creative concept there syn.. specially since the poem is titled pause and reading it actually makes you pause Very tight.

 

[Jocka]

Simply - great. This gives you the rhythm to recite it.. makes it even more special. I like it.

 

[Synful*Luv]

That's what i've been trying to do lately. Switch things up. I find writing as I would recite is working out better for me. Also seems to make it an easier read as now people are able to read it as it was written which makes it a little more personal for the readers.