do u think this title is overused?..
copying is a trend nowadays,
everyone in search of better ways
but deep inside ,they miss the better days
cos foney words will get no pays
cause everybody has something on their face
something that doesn’t know rase
something without a speed,without a pace
something that always stands its own case
cause life's aint nothing but just another race
and whene you're scared,you always come back to the base
trying to avoid all’ em harmfull rays
cause you're scared,and thats a given
frightened in the way that we living
and you try to resume the breathing
but you always see the killing
there's always a murder,a homicide
cause happiness and you,do not coincide
you're here,reaching for the other side
a chance to win at least this final ride
a ride through borders,barriers and walls
cause no one really cares when you 'falls'
down from above,into to your abyss
cause you know you gon'miss
every touch,and every kiss
every minute,every hour,searching for the bliss
but it's for ever gone,just faded into dust
your medal of honor,ruined from the rust
but you know you gotta,you know must
you know you gotta stand tall from all this fuss
make amends, redeem your self at last
dont be a slave of your past
cause that's what it is,dead and gone
whatever it was,right or wrong
forget it,it's over,your free to live
take this shot given to you and try to give
dont hold the kindness given to you for yourself
dont place it on the dusted,rotten shelf
give some love back,just like you got bestode with it
preach it,share it,don't die with it
do that,and rejoice
do it while you have a choice
cause at any moment,you may not have a choice
you may end up with a bunch of broken toys
back in your past,in your mind
your strength and your faith you gotta bind
so do it,while you have the option
like an orphan given for adoption
you got a second chance,make it worthwhile
make it worth,that extra mile
you may got pain and disbelief
but you will be rewarded for this,for all this grief
so take my word for it, and let it be for real
adhere my sayings, love, share, feel....
feedback would be appreciated..
thnx.
copying is a trend nowadays,
everyone in search of better ways
but deep inside ,they miss the better days
cos foney words will get no pays
cause everybody has something on their face
something that doesn’t know rase
something without a speed,without a pace
something that always stands its own case
cause life's aint nothing but just another race
and whene you're scared,you always come back to the base
trying to avoid all’ em harmfull rays
cause you're scared,and thats a given
frightened in the way that we living
and you try to resume the breathing
but you always see the killing
there's always a murder,a homicide
cause happiness and you,do not coincide
you're here,reaching for the other side
a chance to win at least this final ride
a ride through borders,barriers and walls
cause no one really cares when you 'falls'
down from above,into to your abyss
cause you know you gon'miss
every touch,and every kiss
every minute,every hour,searching for the bliss
but it's for ever gone,just faded into dust
your medal of honor,ruined from the rust
but you know you gotta,you know must
you know you gotta stand tall from all this fuss
make amends, redeem your self at last
dont be a slave of your past
cause that's what it is,dead and gone
whatever it was,right or wrong
forget it,it's over,your free to live
take this shot given to you and try to give
dont hold the kindness given to you for yourself
dont place it on the dusted,rotten shelf
give some love back,just like you got bestode with it
preach it,share it,don't die with it
do that,and rejoice
do it while you have a choice
cause at any moment,you may not have a choice
you may end up with a bunch of broken toys
back in your past,in your mind
your strength and your faith you gotta bind
so do it,while you have the option
like an orphan given for adoption
you got a second chance,make it worthwhile
make it worth,that extra mile
you may got pain and disbelief
but you will be rewarded for this,for all this grief
so take my word for it, and let it be for real
adhere my sayings, love, share, feel....
feedback would be appreciated..
thnx.
maybe tooo long but it was good, it sounded a lil hollow to me, make sure u capture the emotion u want 2, Konchas get in touch with me boy 
long time no see, PM me, oh and check out the new battle 
so judge my ass it goes thru 3 pages aight? props keep the writing up.....get more active round here 2
