Smokin' my ganja with the tribe of Extreme

[Jala Kan Georgio]

I love to smoke my ganja
Oh yeah Oh yeah

I love to smoke my ganja while watching the tube of you

I love to smoke my ganja while watching the tube of you
seeing the Van Dam splatter the brains all over the tube
seeing the tag team he had with Sabu

puff puff pass sayeth the tribe of 420
puff puff pass sayeth the tribe of extreme

The wise man of the tribe
His name was Paul Heyman
My shaman, my Rabbi,
he was never just a layman

He spoke with passion
of his tribe of extreme
puff puff pass
if you know what I mean

oh I love to smoke my ganja
oh yeah oh yeah

I love to smoke my ganja with my tribe of extreme
I love to smoke my ganja with my tribe of extreme
I love to smoke it anywhere if you know what I mean

but I love to smoke my ganja with my tribe of extreme

Jala Kan Georgio

 

[Lil KaMiKaZe]

like i've just said in the other thread...try to structured yo' text by watchin' the number of syllables in yo' lines....it looks like an unfinished text...add methaphors to embelish yo' text and have something more than others rappers....
a text like that shouldn't be "posted",it should be "rapped" because just readin' make it look weak...maybe if you got the voice and flow,you could make a "bangin" track but that's all...

Return The Favor http://www.streethop.com/forums/showthread.php?t=94309

...Keep Improvin'....