The day of my reckoning (part one)

[Tha Thug Poet]

***Alright here is an attempt to write some shit that has been on my mind, I havent really done this in bout a year so bare with me since I'm probably rusty as all hell***

Death before dishonor award me the purple heart
My words ricochet like shrapnel and tear others apart
I've been called a Führer and tried for my sins put me on trial
Chased by the American gestapo makes me want to smile
I'm not proud of the things I've done and I'm not ashamed either
My heart was once cold but now My veins pump ether
I got a 17 month old daughter and another one on the way
Obviously I need to make some changes starting today
Used to be I welcomed death to take me Was i Mistaken?
Abadoned by God and even the devil I've been forsaken

When I look into my daughters eyes I know I wont hesitate
To rotate my hate protecting my family with my life is my fate
It's funny in retrospect that someone I've know less than 2 year
Makes me wanna lay down my life, shit reduces me to tears
I want everything for her and my family by any means neccesary
Tell me who I gotta bury for them I'd meet an apothacary

I'm not a thug strip down my exterior remove my glock
eliminate my hate and conseal the passion for my block
Please dont remove my emotions for I will be an empty shell
I'm just tryin to stuggle with the terms of my own hell

 

[The.Menace]

I like this, good to see you back boy, cause you bring a different style in here then anyone else, this unique. You'll have another baby? Damn man, congratz I guess, now start usin those rubbers lol.

 

[Tha Thug Poet]

thanks alot menace. i knew that i could always count on u to leave me some feedback its much appreciated homie

 

[~live2tell~]

I liked how personal it was and thought you expressed well with a nice varied choice of vocab, it was also interesting to read and you kept my focus till the end - nice drop :thumb:

 

[kimbo_thug]

I'm not a thug strip down my exterior remove my glock
eliminate my hate and conseal the passion for my block
Please dont remove my emotions for I will be an empty shell
I'm just tryin to stuggle with the terms of my own hell

Loved this last verse , some nice shit for being a bit rusty if this is you rusty id luv 2 see ya best work lol
keep it up man xx

 

[Tha Thug Poet]

I'm not a thug strip down my exterior remove my glock
eliminate my hate and conseal the passion for my block
Please dont remove my emotions for I will be an empty shell
I'm just tryin to stuggle with the terms of my own hell

Loved this last verse , some nice shit for being a bit rusty if this is you rusty id luv 2 see ya best work lol
keep it up man xx

thanks alot it really means alot... i havent dropped anything prior to this in about a year. when i left in Jan 05. It's gonna take awhile to get used to writing again but i'm sure i'll get used to it

 

[kimbo_thug]

thanks alot it really means alot... i havent dropped anything prior to this in about a year. when i left in Jan 05. It's gonna take awhile to get used to writing again but i'm sure i'll get used to it

Well ya no what they say pratice makes perfect
good luck with that lol xx

 

[XIAN]

That was deep and I hope you do make those changes and your life improves, hopefully your love for the kids will do that. But yeah considering you haven't written in a while, that flowed very well.
~peace~

 

[Tha Thug Poet]

thanks it really means alot when people tell me how they truly feel