The Demons Within

#1
I speak the truth but the things i say are irrelevant
whispers of death that cant be heard if im yellin it
the prophecys of man written in satanic elements
The following of a voice not knowing whos tellin it
God was named Eloheem one god to rule the world
How can 1 God be when if translated means plural
conspiracies to hide evil got me lost in a wind whirl
And shit only gets worse as i watch the smoke swirl
So i hit the leaf again chill out try 2 calm my nerves
My lungs burn and i feel eternal fire not of this earth
My eyes bleed red woundering is this what i deserve
Demons screamin in my ears demanding who i serve
No angels to save me here god must grade on a curve
I took the highway 2 hell and probly i shoulda swerved
no turnin bak now 2 late i just carved the wrist incision
I scream 4 the blood to stop but it dont wanna listen
I chose this life why isnt it what i had envisioned
The demons in my head speakin on that triple 6 religon
evil thoughts dementing my mind I cant take no more
spinning backwards records on twisted guitar chords
Each time the string plucks my sanity splits a little
Until my personality cracks straight down the middle
A war erupts between demons and a heavenly prescence
Then i realize its neither, i have become my own mencace
 

utaks

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#3
Homie! Thats sooo ill, I gotta here you rap this to some dark beat, because this came straight from your soul.... soul food dood, keep it up! ;)

EDIT: change the last word from "mencace (expecting you were looking for menace)" to "essence" though... so deep there though bro... so deep...

Peace,
 
#5
Thanks 4 the feedbak guys thats 1 of my first flows on that dark type sh*t. finally somebody let me know what they thought I appreciate that. and u both rite i gotta get a mic and some beats 2 convey the full effect. Im working on getting that together.
 

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