Thought Process

[kman_69]

hey guys, sorry i havnt been online much lately...seems like PJ is kinda dead now huh?....its a shame... i love posting in here!

anyway, heres a new drop...im still writing as much as ever...but thought id share this one!

peace...


Thought Process -06 June 2007
I write a rhyme, sometimes -i wont finish for days..
-even when I’m tired, I still need my ideas to be conveyed
..spraying out lyrics over text documents, often..
-it helps to build confidence, making em’ complex
..even if I’m not rockin' em’, its still strong opinions,
and thoughts based on what I’m feeling; or literature I’ve been reading
-really, whatever speaks to me.. like ideas put forward
by guys like Clinton Richard Dawkins, and Stephen William Hawking
-talking, about the universe and our progressive evolution
..to me its beautiful how such polar topics are infused, and..
it really helps to put some perspective on basic collective confusion..
-and socially intrusive ignorance, like "how can people live with it?"
.. i wont get specific about religions.. but, man.. i think im finished.

 

[ImmortalTech]

nice lil peice man, iliked the concept.

~peace

 

[Jocka]

liked the good verbal usage. The idea of the poem was nice as well. I was feeling it

 

[KJ1]

yeah i liked the way you pulled out the mind thesaurus on that one.... great concept also... enjoyed

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

Deffently feelin ur vocab - sweet flow aswel dude.. I enjoyed this read.

I write a rhyme, sometimes -i wont finish for days..
-even when I’m tired, I still need my ideas to be conveyed
..spraying out lyrics over text documents, often..
-it helps to build confidence, making em’ complex
..even if I’m not rockin' em’, its still strong opinions,

^^I liked this part heaps man, The way u opened this piece, it got my attention just nicely.

"seems like PJ is kinda dead now huh?....its a shame..."

^^I agree!! hehe brats back...

pz

 

[The.Menace]

Hehe, nice work kman, I think I can relate....there are so many topics we wanna talk about....and so that just leads to ill amounts of rhymes and texts and crazy thoughts....I dunno if we're ever finished.

 

[Kadafi Son]

Like everybody else said, u had a cool concept, but for some reason, it was kinda hard for me to read. Maybe the pauses, dashes or rhythm. I don't know, I just had to slow myself down at times. But what this poem was about is what matters to me. cool