Today’s Lesson

#1
i wrote this to get out some frustrations....after putting Poet Lauereate II on in my car the other day (one of my fav songs EVER)...the first lineis a paraphrase of what one of my friends-friends had to say...so i thought id "take him to school" wih this peice...enjoy

Today’s Lesson -22 Feb 2006

"duhh.. yo yo niggER G in the hood; what is this?"

"its the unparalleled malleable enunciation of a sentence
..its the invention of hip-hop, a grossly underrated ART
of which has 9 elements.. equally underrated as they are
-hmm, let me just start with what’s written in its lyrics
..specifically what’s written, as it gets progressively definitive
-if you listen to its lyricists, you'll hear in-depth stories
with so much word-play and intelligence in in-depth assortments
..without ignoring the fact that no other genre is as creative
-as having a 200 bar articulation taking different perspective places
and in case you didn’t notice its humor, 'punch lines' & its sadness
-no other genre has used such a wide array of vocab, its
..just sad the commercial aspect of this element doesn’t show this..
-once used as a successful political tool to provoke things
..when people felt 'hopeless'.. its words were used to unite
its broken down racial barriers, and its saved peoples lives
..but I’m.. getting off track here.. let me get back to the music
with love stories so luminous, and 'diss' tracks so subdued, it
..alludes me how people can't see its diversity in content
-also, often ignored are its musical composition accomplishments..
its often been stated as being the most artistic endeavor ever
-using guitar rifts, beats, loops, and scratches instead of..
..lesser.. instruments, for example: samples from Beethoven’s 9th
-could be mixed in with bass lines from the Jackson 5..
..so 'why?' you may ask, hasn’t hip-hop made more of a impression, its
-the answer to the question.. its still in its development..
-and that’s just the first element, I can always continue with the second?"

"nah that’s enough man, coz I’ll probably just forget it ..duhh"
 

Ivory$horty

†PoeticPrincess†
#2
That was dope. I loved the vocab you used (though maybe slightly overused?) Flow seemed tight to me though, and I loved the message you were getting across.
Really felt this...your drops always tend to impress me.

3 hugz,2 kisses,1 love
~*Ivory$horty*~
 
#3
aw thanks....always good to impress hehe :)...yeah vocab could be a bit over the top....but it was in a Canibus type vien given the nature of why i wrote the peice, so thats prolly why...but ah well, as long as the message gets across

thanks for peepin!

peace
 

Jurhum

Well-Known Member
#4
This one is awsome. Great job.. As usual.. i haven't been here for a while.. read this.. great job..

too bad it's being slept on man..

never the less.. great peice... keep up the good work...

always enjoyed your poetry..
 
#5
thanks jurhum, that means a lot!...

yeah, its gettin very slept on hehe....but ah well, as long as some people appreciate it, thats all that matters!

thanks again for peepin!

peace.
 

Kadafi Son

Well-Known Member
#7
Yeah, your piece deserves a lot of recognition. I thought it was cool how you put it down and how much knowledge you were kickin'.Tha words and tha concept was tight too

But peace, and keep doin' ya thing...
 
#8
thanks man, i appreciate that!

i think a lot of people are put off by the length..and the "big words"...but ah well, as long as a few get the msg im puttin across, thats all that matters!

thanks again, glad u feelin this one!

peace.
 
#9
I liked this alot, your vocab was really extensive and stood out to me. Would love to hear this spoken, I think it would sound really nice. Nice message too. Keep writing.
 

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