wiseguy tell me what you think did it in 10min

[Patrik08]

its official
there no more auditions
am a limited adition
i put my soul true this mission
so put your hands up and lissen
am one of the wiseguys
i dont tell lies
i make one homo two homo three homo go poff
they just to had troops but now there no more fag to shot
and if you wanna live like a gangbanger
you better lern how to slang like a drug della
but you will neva be on my level am a fuckin killa
am adicted to this life
theres no other shit for me
and thats one of the things what makes me wise
i dont live by the dice
and i wouldent bet on my life
its a no win
even tho am one of those ho have just begin
you can thel am doing well by my rim
and if you wanna stand in my way
you whont be here for another day
a river and a bodybag is all i say

 

[ArtsyGirl]

Didnt really flow together imo and in some spots just didnt make sense.. It was a quik one so maybe take more time on it, keep writtin tho