8 bars from a while ago

[ARon]

8 bars from a while back, what you think?

Stop actin like you can contend its incomprehensible/
the way im quick to defend and crack your mandible/
its understandable you wanna be the best/
but i must confess, compared to us you'll be no contest/
you'll get pressed like the sunday morning paper/
the verbal slayer,
pussy accumulator cus girls love a tight rhyme sayer/
my criminal data is proof i dont fuck around/
to tell the truth thats just proof that my skin is dark brown/

 

[Authentic]

Haha ... Arrow ... you are hott ... I heard your track "Times Out" ...
Get at me on AIM ... jbsktball23 ... wordio.

 

[*suspect#1*]

first few lines sound liek somthing mike tyson would spit

 

[ARon]

huh, that mike tyson would spit? Explain that more.

 

[akae47]

^^more like
Stop actin like you can contend its incomprehensible
the way im quick to bite your ear off cuz it's edible

but anyway, nice lines

 

[Tha Thug Poet]

lol....not bad shit...like the way the flow goes together.

 

[*suspect#1*]

^^more like
Stop actin like you can contend its incomprehensible
the way im quick to bite your ear off cuz it's edible

but anyway, nice lines

lol haha

 

[*suspect#1*]

first few lines sound liek somthing mike tyson would spit

my bad didnt mean to hit you off like that........

what i meant was some lines mike tyson would "rap"

 

[ARon]

Lol, i feel you. Man what the fuck happened to SYF, Used to be all kinds of people droppin in here, BRING IT BACK.

 

[*suspect#1*]

Lol, i feel you. Man what the fuck happened to SYF, Used to be all kinds of people droppin in here, BRING IT BACK.

still thats some good shit you should spit over a beat so we can hear whatyou sound like

 

[Florida123]

8 bars from a while back, what you think?

Stop actin like you can contend its incomprehensible/
the way im quick to defend and crack your mandible/
its understandable you wanna be the best/
but i must confess, compared to us you'll be no contest/
you'll get pressed like the sunday morning paper/
the verbal slayer,
pussy accumulator cus girls love a tight rhyme sayer/
my criminal data is proof i dont fuck around/
to tell the truth thats just proof that my skin is dark brown/

good shit...sounds like u have experience...i liked what i highlighted the best

 

[ImmortalTech]

nice, some tight lines, and a wide variety of vocab.
~keep droppin peace

 

[down n' dirty]

nice vocab,but multis wouldve helped the flow
...keep posting..peace

 

[ARon]

^^^The flow is on point. Multi's are way overrated anyway here, plus there is a multi in like every line. Thanks though.

 

[down n' dirty]

obviously you dont know whata multi is .morning paper and verbal slayer arent multi's.i can tell you dont take criticism well so ill not respond any further.if you want to see what a multi is..peep my drop
peace

 

[ARon]

^Lmao. Not gonna even bother.
By the Way, i love criticism, but only from people who know what they are talking about.