A.D.D this is me and me is this

#1
How these faggots gonna rush me cuz i'm rusty/1
Gotcha wantin to rush me but the homo is MUS G/2
Havent hit the Portal yet grab my immortal tech and bust/3
2pacs a legend but at the end of the day it's ashes to ashes and dust to dust/4
I take u from the beggining to the end and back to square one/5
Compared to nun need no gun i do this lazy rhymin for fun/6
Sippin Hennesy and Cognac in the back of the Lac wanting more/7
I settled the score how u gonna clown on my mom when shes a fucking whore/8
I must have been blindsighted but criminal minded when i stepped back/9
Launched a verbal attack at myself cuz real competitors we lack/10
Sit back reminicin bout Hitemup dot com that shit was the bomb/11
It exploaded then coroded like a 12x's cd fuckin rom/12
Some may say these rhymes or weak but Webster was out on vacation/13
All i'm left with is my playstation and a dream to rule the nation/14
I assassinated the pope but the government swears that it was he/15
God damn conspiracy that someone took a like so near to me/16
See I'm the type that would slit my mothers throat for fortune and fame/17
Yet no one wants to give me that cuz they say theyve heard that in tha game/18
It was me poppin perkiset witout a circus net before there was an eminem/19
My demo tapes i was sending them but now i get rejected cuz i sould like him/20
it's Bizarra the rambling that i'm at i thought i was fat so i went on a diet/21
My idea of being a heathly was goin donw on a vegitarian...i sugguest u try it/22
Any shit i've dont i've denied it would want the wrong people to be knowin/23
My education is minimal cuz when it was hailin i thought it was snowin/24
I like hitting bitches, killin switches or maybe it's the other way around/25
Let talk about attention deficit disorder and how many bottles of x i'm gonna pound/26
wait what was i saying and what did it mean? Did u just grab my ass?/27
guest that last part was a retoricle question so silly of me to have asked/28


to be continue at some point farther on it life
 
#3
yo, word, i liked this, some coo shit N' true shit.
Don't nobody really reply, why do u think they moved it to the bottom.

But yeah i seen a couple of parts where, and I'm just guessin', a word is missin', but yeah tight piece, freestyle or not
 

The.Menace

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#5
Took me some time boy but here I am. :)

Well, u had some good rhymes in there and I liked the flow, it was definetly TTP style, what is missing is a deeper msg that I know you can deliver, but you said it yourself " i do this lazy rhymin for fun" - so I guess it's go.

this part made me smile:
It was me poppin perkiset witout a circus net before there was an eminem/19
My demo tapes i was sending them but now i get rejected cuz i sould like him/20
cya around
 
#6
The.Menace said:
Took me some time boy but here I am. :)

Well, u had some good rhymes in there and I liked the flow, it was definetly TTP style, what is missing is a deeper msg that I know you can deliver, but you said it yourself " i do this lazy rhymin for fun" - so I guess it's go.

this part made me smile:


cya around
thanks for stoppin by and peepin my ish...i'mma hitcha on that collab and....anyways thanks for the feedback my nayga
 

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