Alone

[Kadafi Son]

Here's a little somethin' I did a while back. check it out...

A-Asking yourself what to do

L-Lockin' yourself in solitude

O-Open to nobody 'til you breakdown

N-Never go to sleep. Stay laying on the ground

E-Everybody thinks you're paranoid and that is true
I try to find myself and I don't have a clue
Relationships. Are they neccessary? Are they really needed?
I'm alone and then I cry because I feel like I'm defeated.
No one knows what I really go through 'til I explode
All of a sudden, I don't give a damn and then my anger grows
I'm suppose to go through this. Hell. I'm an adolescent
But why have I been blessed with a life that tries to keep me stressin'
And then they look at me and wonder why I'm so defensive
Cuz when I close my eyes, I'm always alone in this vision

Just tryna keep up with ya'll

Peace

 

[kimbo_thug]

Very nice was diffirent liked it was feeling the lines
Relationships. Are they neccessary? Are they really needed?
I'm alone and then I cry because I feel like I'm defeated.

that was tight as hell !! KEEP IT UP xx

 

[The.Menace]

I like the idea of the capital letters and the lines afterwards, but after the E u suddenly start a "normal" poem and it kinda get's me confused from schema standpoint. Well, anyway, I'm all alone all the time, so I feel you on that last line.