Anticipation

[The.Menace]

Thx 2 anyone that replied, well artistic girl....actually most of my poems are about 12 lines so it's not really shorter than the average, but well....I like the word 'great'.

@Wood, thx - years of tryin and practice pay off a lil sooner or later.

 

[KJ1]

i like the way ya use your words and i think i could learn alot bout how to structure my stories from your work

 

[The.Menace]

Hehe, Thx. Yes I agree, readin other people's poetry and really try 2 look into it helps to improve your own style, no doubt. Well, if you go back one or two or three pages (or use "find all threads started" ) - you'll find some more of my work if you're interrested.