Dat Niggaz Crazy

[Kadafi Son]

Sup ya'll. I ain't been on here for a couple of weeks and I noticed this part of the thread was daed. So I'll a short poem I did recently.

I don't know why, but everyday I feel like this
"Dat Niggaz Crazy" and I see tragedy in the mist
Everybody that I know, they've got somethin' to scream
"Dat Niggaz Crazy" I'm just stressed and in my sleep, I never dream
As I grew into a young man, mama said in the back of her mind
"Dat Niggaz Crazy" so tell me what's supposed to happen in my prime
Should I stay true to myself or live my life acting phony
"Dat Niggaz Crazy" And thats why he's so lonely
These words sre tatted on my heart and whispered by my loved ones.
"Dat Niggaz Crazy" don't blame it on the world that made me
Blame it on the destiny at the end of my rugged path
Dat Nigga Ain't really Crazy. Lookin at his fuckin past...


Just somethin to write and for ya'll to read. If I get a chance later on, I'll put on a better one.

Peace

 

[The.Menace]

This place was closed for a while that's why there are no new posts - now the place is back up with the same rules as always, 3 replies per poem you post - therefor I'll close this, I'm sorry. Do your replies and I'll reopen it.

peace

 

[The.Menace]

uppin

 

[kman_69]

nice drop!

Blame it on the destiny at the end of my rugged path
Dat Nigga Ain't really Crazy. Lookin at his fuckin past...

i liked the ending...

peace!

 

[~live2tell~]

Nice and simple, good flow, like someone else mentioned I liked the ending alot, probably my fave part.