Ecstasy On A Balcony. (4th Floor On The 4th) *READ THIS SHIT*

[kman_69]

Ecstasy On A Balcony. (4th Floor On The 4th)

haha i was a little (ok VERY ) twisted when i wrote this on my birthday...but i was just reading back over it today...and yeah, just had to post it for you guys...

Ecstasy On A Balcony. (4th Floor On The 4th) -Nov 2005

as my brains come together up off of the pavement
my skull re-assembles just as it starts to ache, n'
-im faced with a replacement image of my own face
..reflecting in the glass of the 1st floors office space
"wait, is this a mistake?" is what passes through my head
fuck, whats the difference -2 more seconds & im dead..
what more can be said?, as im hurled up towards the 2nd floor
-my body starts to twirl..i feel like a rejected whore..
..as the 3rd floor approaches i dont feel like im supposed to
i dont feel as provoked, i think: "should this really be over?"
..my destination closens, i feel my heartbeat stop..
-my lungs fill up with air, i choke, as my feet reach for the top..
what?..the fuck?..man this is perfect, im standing vertical
-jumping seems absurd, i've never seen a better view..
and look who's next to you.. -hey, its my girl!..
as a bird flies over backwards.. man i love this world!

 

[The.Menace]

yeah I like it. It's different, esp unexpected comin from you but I kinda like it, you got a couple of good rhymes in there.

peace

 

[kman_69]

thanks menace...yeah a bit out of character....i think i was just tryna be creative tho..

thanks for peepin!

peace.

 

[Saint33]

it was strange, i liked it tho. and wut do u mean by twisted? wer u on sumin wen u wrote? drunk? or jus feelin wierd and outta it?

 

[kman_69]

^^yeah did about 4 pills that night.. lol

thanks for peepin man...glad u like!

peace.

 

[Kadafi Son]

yeah, it was sorta wierd, but I think you were creative with it to. Didn't really understand the whole moral to this, but it was interesting.

Peace

 

[kman_69]

^^thanks for peepin man!

 

[~live2tell~]

I don't think it's twisted at all, it's different yeah but not twisted. I liked it thought your vocab was good, it's not something I can relate to but I liked it nonetheless.