History Repeats Itself (if you let it)

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History Repeats Itself (if you let it)

I thought I'd gotten past
Learnt to live my life again
I am now reliving my past
Learnt nothing at all, alone again

Past history forming my future
Again I'm failing, running scared
Past memories haunting my future
Again, of the future I'm scared

Future happiness is to be my aim
Scared to live, but to live is my will
Future smiles, tears, fears - one aim
Scared yet determined, overcome I willAim high - reach out to him
Will he always be there for me?
Aim low - say goodbye to him
Will he ever truly understand me?

sara, i was really liking this one, i can relate to this a hell of a lot!!! my favourite part is bolded. this to me is excactly how i feel at times!!! wow! great writing!!!

oops already replied, but hey its a great poem

Thanks for your feedback Katie - twice!

 

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I really liked your style of rhyming in this one, overall its a great piece


That had to be my favorite part, loved the positivity in that verse, you ended it nicely too :thumb:

Thx for reading this Jamal and taking the time to post your thoughts, they always mean alot to me.

I'm glad you liked the style of rhyming as it was something new for me I was trying and so I wasn't sure if it would work or not, but it seemed to.

Thx again

 

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very different, but a good read...

Aim high - reach out to him
Will he always be there for me?
Aim low - say goodbye to him
Will he ever truly understand me?

^^thought that was cool.

peace.

Thx, I'm glad you enjoyed, ta for posting your feedback.