How many more

[The.Menace]

How many more

How many more ryhmes I have 2 write
before there is peace 4 my soul in sight
How many more push ups I have 2 do
before I'm strong enough 2 make it through
How many more baskets I have 2 score
before I get some respect from peeps that I adore
How many more blunts I have to smoke
before I accept that life is nothing but a joke
How many more nights I have 2 lie in bed awake
before I realize what 2 live this life it does take
How many more days I have 2 feel pain
before there is 4 me some kind of gain
How many more times I have to cry
before I'm finally allowed 2 die

 

[Farzin]

Thats my kind of poem. Love it. The melancholy of The menace!

Good concept. It sounds like its from the heart. Thats what its about.

Nice man

 

[Jurhum]

beautiful man.. really nice.. keep it up.. love it

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

This poem simple but deep Tommy, & I can respect that.. easy 2 read but it didnt take from the emotion @ all.. I was feelin ur concept

How many more blunts I have to smoke
before I accept that life is nothing but a joke
How many more nights I have 2 lie in bed awake


How many more times I have to cry
before I'm finally allowed 2 die

^^Tight.. nice work Tommy! Keep ya head up!

pz

 

[Jazzy Jeffy]

nice stuff, how long ahve you been doing poems for

 

[.:ORiGiNALOLDiESz:.]

Completely relate!
Well written.
Nice job!
*Gives you a gold star*

 

[The.Menace]

thx to anyone that took the time to read it, special thx to those that took the time to reply.

 

[Tha Thug Poet]

damn my boy still holdin' it down huh? good stuff as usual man. i really liked it especially the end. keep it up homie

 

[The.Menace]

thx for reply TTP. Yeah still around, still a mod, still writin.... thx for the kind words.

 

[masta247]

that was really good

 

[The.Menace]

thx masta, just a lil something I wrote, there is way more to come.

 

[Stred]

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