i was bored

[Tha_Wood]

when i wake up your on my mind, your all i can ever think about, during school your on my mind, when i am with you its the happyest time of my life, theres no place i would rather be that just chilling with you. my mates like you and you like my mates, your all i could ever ask for, all my dreams rolled into one. you are always there for me and will never let me down. i love you with all my heart and i always will, i love you beer.

 

[THEV1LL4N]

haha, nice 1. i thought u was talkin about the girl of ur dreams who u really wanna b wiv. more like the drink of ur dreams.

 

[The.Menace]

Hehe, yeah, it's a short lil piece. For it to be poetry in my opinion, you'd have to add more structure to it and more rhymes and all, but well, it doesn't always have 2 be all serious, right?

I wrote a similar poem once, btw, about a bottle of wine.

 

[KJ1]

when i first started reading it i thougiht it was gonna be about heroin...lol.. i thought it was funny ,,, im new tothis poetry stuff but im trying to get into it,,,,