Just Writing- A Keystle

#1
just kinda started writing and went till i felt like stoppin :thumb:

_____________

If you're cocky or confident
That's tight, but don't JUST talk... get on with it
Everyone accomplishes things, reaches dreams
Realizes the change of scenes, and how deep it seems
You have to accept the facts, recollect, look back
Relax, then start again and get your respect on track
Take breaks; take time, why live in a hurry
Oblivious to the detail because your vision is blurry
Listen, don’t worry.. some things are just TOO important
Time is a temptation and it’s necessary that you ignore it
Explore, get more from the life you lead
Try to see what the difference is between what you and I believe
And WHY? The ultimate question, HOPE for suggestions
Just to analyze them and you’ll go through progression
What are you hopin to find, don’t be afraid to ask
You can’t re-create the past, so you gotta open your mind
And what everyone knows will align, voices combine
Choices rewind, and we see what needs to be done
Believing as one leads to achieving as one
Thinking as many, seeing as one, dreaming as all
Standing tall, refusing to fall and moving on
Using bonds to look back and see what we grew beyond
 
#2
just kinda started writing and went till i felt like stoppin :thumb:

_____________

If you're cocky or confident
That's tight, but don't JUST talk... get on with it
Everyone accomplishes things, reaches dreams
Realizes the change of scenes, and how deep it seems
You have to accept the facts, recollect, look back
Relax, then start again and get your respect on track
Take breaks; take time, why live in a hurry
Oblivious to the detail because your vision is blurry
Listen, don’t worry.. some things are just TOO important
Time is a temptation and it’s necessary that you ignore it
Explore, get more from the life you lead
Try to see what the difference is between what you and I believe
And WHY? The ultimate question, HOPE for suggestions
Just to analyze them and you’ll go through progression
What are you hopin to find, don’t be afraid to ask
You can’t re-create the past, so you gotta open your mind
And what everyone knows will align, voices combine
Choices rewind, and we see what needs to be done
Believing as one leads to achieving as one
Thinking as many, seeing as one, dreaming as all
Standing tall, refusing to fall and moving on
Using bonds to look back and see what we grew beyond
 
#3
god that's tight , still as superb lyrically as always!
and the way you write it ( without the - ) somehow makes it flow - easier to read - more naturally , you know what I mean? it doesn't seem as forced to see the multis ...
deep as always

props man! nice to see ya rhyming!

pz
 

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