I carry my emotions cross oceans shinning with a very/
Deceiving clarity in the mind false with a hope/
Moss has soaked with the frost that cause my pulse to be broke/
And froze with the idea that she is in another’s arms/
On sites her pictures drive me senseless, the lover harms/
It alarms me as shadows battle with stealth flights/
My main drag is knowing she’s holding someone else tight/
So my mirrors who are the listeners to blues which won’t atone/
I’m shown she’s the one always lonely and I’m the one always alone/
Great use of imagery throughout, but the closing was really strong man. I really wanna hear it over a beat!
Deceiving clarity in the mind false with a hope/
Moss has soaked with the frost that cause my pulse to be broke/
And froze with the idea that she is in another’s arms/
On sites her pictures drive me senseless, the lover harms/
It alarms me as shadows battle with stealth flights/
My main drag is knowing she’s holding someone else tight/
So my mirrors who are the listeners to blues which won’t atone/
I’m shown she’s the one always lonely and I’m the one always alone/
Great use of imagery throughout, but the closing was really strong man. I really wanna hear it over a beat!