Mis Palabras.

[.:ORiGiNALOLDiESz:.]

I never really know how to title whatever I write.
So whatever I post might be marked some form of Untitled.
Or something vague like that. Sorry. But here goes one.



Each day,
As the sun fades into darkness.
I can't remember for the life of me,
What I did that day.
Each 24 hours
Bunching so closely with the next
Is really quite mind numbing when I
Actually take the time to think about it.
For me it seems as though,
Everything in the life I knew,
Was suddenly paused.
Stopped for a moment
Which may last for eternity.
But it really hasn't.
Nothing has changed.
NOTHING.
But everything has.
I'm struggling to find
Which way is up.
All I see is,
Ten shades of grey.
Each with parts I love
And parts I hate.
But nothing that seems
In the least
Familiar.

 

[Kadafi Son]

I never really know how to title whatever I write.
So whatever I post might be marked some form of Untitled.
Or something vague like that. Sorry. But here goes one.



Each day,
As the sun fades into darkness.
I can't remember for the life of me,
What I did that day.
Each 24 hours
Bunching so closely with the next
Is really quite mind numbing when I
Actually take the time to think about it.
For me it seems as though,
Everything in the life I knew,
Was suddenly paused.
Stopped for a moment
Which may last for eternity.
But it really hasn't.
Nothing has changed.
NOTHING.
But everything has.
I'm struggling to find
Which way is up.
All I see is,
Ten shades of grey.
Each with parts I love
And parts I hate.
But nothing that seems
In the least
Familiar.

I got a good title 4 ya. Maybe...State Without Reckoning....?

I don't know, but anywayz, this poem was ok for me. I usually like poems that rhyme, but this one was still relevant to me. So u get props. Good poem

peace

 

[.:ORiGiNALOLDiESz:.]

Nice!
If its okay with you
I'll use that title.
And also
Thanks for the feedback.

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

damn! this is freakn mad! Im feelin this so much. I can relate to what u wrote down.. this is the sort of poetry i cant write well myself so i can only respect when someone else does an awsome job.. this is tight.

Nothing has changed.
NOTHING.
But everything has.
I'm struggling to find
Which way is up.
All I see is,
Ten shades of grey.
Each with parts I love
And parts I hate.
But nothing that seems
In the least
Familiar.

^^^I felt the whole piece but this had me like damn! Loved it. keep it up!

peace

 

[The.Menace]

I don't know, but anywayz, this poem was ok for me. I usually like poems that rhyme, but this one was still relevant to me. So u get props. Good poem

I agree with kadafi, I usually like poems that rhyme, but I like this one for whatever reasons, probablly cause I can relate to these lines a lot ...right now....

Nothing has changed.
NOTHING.
But everything has.

pz