Mornin

[Dizal]

Had no sleep and im still awake to this morning/
Im not tired, no I havent even started yawning/
Its still dark outside but the street lamps begin to fade/
The sun will rise and shine through my curtains like a sharp blade/
Cuttin through the smallest gaps to reflect on my T.V/
By then I will probally be eating breakfast and taking it easy/
Cornflakes in my bowl covered in milk and sugar I cant wait/
Thinkin about it now makes my stomach rumble and ache/

LoL aint wrote in a while just found this where hitemup is again :O ill make some replys later and write a decent piece I was just bored and wrote this! now for my cereals

 

[~live2tell~]

Had no sleep and im still awake to this morning/
Im not tired, no I havent even started yawning/
Its still dark outside but the street lamps begin to fade/
The sun will rise and shine through my curtains like a sharp blade/
Cuttin through the smallest gaps to reflect on my T.V/
By then I will probally be eating breakfast and taking it easy/
Cornflakes in my bowl covered in milk and sugar I cant wait/
Thinkin about it now makes my stomach rumble and ache/

LoL aint wrote in a while just found this where hitemup is again :O ill make some replys later and write a decent piece I was just bored and wrote this! now for my cereals

lol, this is nice lil rhyme, made me smile when reading which I can always appreciate. Maybe it needs an accompanying verse - night?
That may be interesting.

 

[jm5471]

i liked it you could work it into a day for the second verse an like xxxsaraxxx said make the last one the night

 

[Cown]

lol that was great, good to see peoms with a little humor in them sometimes The light shining through the curtains part cracked me up, cuz it's so true

 

[Buck_Buck_Bing]

This was boring, nice effort though