My baby

[kimbo_thug]

Giving you up was tha hardest thing ive ever had to do
But in the end , a life like this wasnt best for you
when they took you away , felt like a part of me went
felt like i knew you , casue nearly 9 months togeather we spent

Think about it everyday , gonna drive myself crazy
Young and scared as hell i wasnt ready for a baby
So at tha time that was that
Give up anything i have just to have ya back
Even for a day so i could hold you in my arms
And explain why shit turned out this way

Couldnt forget about you even if i wanted to
Every Child i see in the street reminds me of losing you
Sounds crazy cause ive never seen ya face
But still u was my unborn baby no one could ever replace

No one knows whats in my head or what im goin throught
just remember what mummy did she did for you .....

 

[goymz]

Keep ya head up girl.

Every day that passes from now is one step closer to everything being ok.

 

[kimbo_thug]

im tryin !! thanks for tha support xx

 

[The.Menace]

I really like this poem - very personal and I like the flow.

 

[XIAN]

Thanx that was really really personal and emotional, it's good that you're able to put something so deep in a poem. It was touching, I hope you get well and happy,
~peace~

 

[kman_69]

fuck that was DEEP kimbo!!....im really feeling this one

No one knows whats in my head or what im goin throught
just remember what mummy did she did for you

^^that was deep as!....good to get it all out on the page huh?...it will defeinetly help deal with things if u can write about em

anyways, keep it up

peace.

 

[Helena]

this was really good. i can relate to this, very deep

 

[Ivory$horty]

Last couple of lines really packed a punch. Very deep, heartfelt and emotional piece. Pain seeped through those few lines you blessed us with, but I sensed a lil bit of hope in there too. Keep ya head up babygirl...all things are done or happen for a reason.
Tight drop...keep it up!

3 hugz,2 kisses,1 love
~*Ivory$horty*~

 

[kimbo_thug]

Dam that was just how i felt didnt think i get comments like this shit thanks for taking tha time 2 read means alot
feels betta when ya write shit ya dont know how 2 say down
uppin xx

 

[Jurhum]

^ people always feel true emotions in a poem. That's why they reply.

yours was very deep and personal which made them sypathise and relate with your story.

All I can say, :thumb: