My friend

[XIAN]

You were there when I was down
You were there to cry with me
And also when I was happy
There to laugh it was fun right?

And to let me pour me out
You caught everything I threw
So I feel like I matter
To somebody tonight

And you matter to me
More than you could ever know
I look at you and I find peace
I call you my friend

We have what friendship is.

 

[~live2tell~]

You were there when I was down
You were there to cry with me
And also when I was happy
There to laugh it was fun right?

And to let me pour me out
You caught everything I threw
So I feel like I matter
To somebody tonight

And you matter to me
More than you could ever know
I look at you and I find peace
I call you my friend

We have what friendship is.

Wow, thats real nice

Short, but very powerful. When reading I felt a great sense of meaning.

And to let me pour me out
You caught everything I threw
So I feel like I matter
To somebody tonight

^^ My fave verse

 

[jm5471]

i like the concept that u chose and the different style of rhyming, keep it up

 

[Sebastian]

nice, short poem.

And to let me pour me out
You caught everything I threw
So I feel like I matter
To somebody tonight

^
like this verse the best too

 

[shattered dreams]

And you matter to me
More than you could ever know
I look at you and I find peace
I call you my friend


that was my favorite verse, even though it was a hard choice, nice rhyming pattern, it was different from most of the a a b b type rhyme. nice poem

 

[Mad skillz]

i thought the whole topic was really good. the end line sumed up the whole poem which i though did it justice

 

[Cown]

Poem was great, you expressed everything you needed to express, I don't think it was necessary for it to be longer, very nice job :thumb: keep it up

 

[MonroeThaDon]

sometimes its teh shortest simplest forms of decription taht tell teh best stories. very nice poem ~keep it up

 

[-Daniel-]

I like short poems the best, i use a four line stanza most of the time myself. They are easy to play around with, plus it's the first type of poem I learned (Anyone read 'Please Mrs Butler?' sorry off topic ino.)

 

[Lili]

This is great! it's lovely poem. I clicked on the "last" button in this forum section and your title caught my attention. I like this poem, I can feel the words.

 

[XIAN]

Yeah thanx for bringing it back. I forgot about it, and looking back sometimes makes you remember why or who you wrote it for.

And thanx to everyone for replying. I appreciate each 1 really...

Peace.

 

[k69atie]

Just found this, really enjoyed it, my fav part was the last verse!

keep it up

 

[The.Menace]

missing rhymes.

 

[dubk]

i like how this poem encompasses friendship instead of a relationship. Usually everyone talks about love and heart break, it was nice to see this topic instead. On another note, this thing was made almost 7 months ago which goes to show you that like everyone else...I just don't hit this place up as much as I did long ago.