My Type of Woman Part II

Shadows

Well-Known Member
#1
Yah, I wrote this a while back and I consider it a freewrite, so didn't really use proper grammar or rhymes. Just read to at least the 4th paragraph if you don't read the whole thing.

One that never wishes she can have more b/c our love is forever. One that knows how to live with me, but not understanding how to live without me in a stable manner. One that knows that the smallest things are the biggest things. One that knows how to make the coldest part of my heart warm.

One that can hold a timeless conversation, giving me everything of whatever it is I need. One that don't stop the music while rockin' to the beat on my joy stick. One that knows I'm her puppet because she's my earth angel. One that knows this is how we do, while many men be asking 21 questions like they trying to make a fable.

One that stands behind my back, cuz I got hers, allowing me to pursue my Ambitionz Az A Ridah. One that knows it's us against the world, shedding so many tears cuz love aint easy. One that has her mind made up of how she wants it, ignoring the hearts of other men while I give her that thug passion. Giving her that California love, laying on the bed looking up at me saying "shorty wanna be a thug," allowing me to bone like All eyes were on me. Then when we thuggin, you never wonder why they call you bitch. One that lets neighbors know my name and b/c of it I ain't hard to find cuz I invented sex. One that thinks that being quiet during sex is blasphemy, so we go Krazy. One that wont get mad when I hold ya head. One that cums so hard she feels like she died, wondering if heaven got a ghetto.

One that shares that Unconditional Love like she has for her Dear Momma. One that knows that if either of us are in pain, we both shed tattoo tears, knowing what it sounds like when thugs cry. One that will love me until the end of time, so I don't have to worry if we were the last ones on earth and if it were so, we'd still be ballin. One that's never crying and starin through our rear view, taking everything one day at a time, always living better dayz cuz we loyal to our game.

One that goes hard till she collapses cuz i'm her superman. One that I know I love irrevocably, but she loves me more. One that looks good enough to eat. One that thinks I'm her fame, but she's my paparazzi when we play the love game, leaving each other starstruck. One that knows I don't wonder if she likes it rough, I'm just glad she does. My little monster that gives me that bad romance leaving me speechless as I dance in the dark. One that can read my poker face, when I say I just wanted to dance but I'd rather be sitting in the park.

One that rocks with you and don't stop till you get enough. My pretty young thing that's Bad enough to make me look at the man in the mirror to find another part of me. My dirty Diana, my smooth criminal, my speed demon, oh the way she makes me feel, it don't matter if our love is black or white.

One that is my Cuttii buddy, ready to love me down. One that knows I cant quit, allowing me to be the rubber band man, riding on 24's cuz I'm the king of the south. One that acts corny and kisses me through the phone cuz she cant wait till she sees me now.

One that had a dirty mind, once she knew she was mine, she be knowing that we'd do it all night. One that's comfortable with her sexuality wanting to melt with me in an orgasm like we had sex in the summer. One that knows shes my sun, my moon, my stars, the greatest romance ever sold. One that sets the mood with or without incense and candles, she just know how to do it right, sex sound like thunder.

One that's rarely pessimistic and when she is, she's pretty optimistic. One that see's and feels our love and knows we were born for this, no doubt, we don't speak, we just feel it underneath it all. One that keeps me in a suspension with out suspense. One that's not afraid to get too close, willing to be my wifey, living lively highly. One that is always in agony and ecstasy, changing into that Victoria secret thong while I take her to bed, making her eyes roll. One that will tie me down have me seeing colors that ain't even on the rainbow.

My miss independent woman, my sexy love that looks cute when she's mad, never going to bed mad. One that can notice me across the room with ease, never letting the thought of me go, never in pain until she has to say good bye. One that will beat any girl to the punch cuz she love her two lovers. One that knows if I lose her, I will lose a good thing, having me where she wants me now but doesn't brag.

One that will have me loving her, loving her until we break up, so I can start fucking her, fucking her until we make up. One that knows we always one step closer to to the end of our runaway knowing we belong together. One that's amazing cuz shes never paranoid, even in the coldest winters. An unselfish lover always telling the weekend to lookout cuz here we come. One that speaks in poetry that only I can understand because she has the key to my heart, filling my brain with amnesia to forget any bad parts. One that can write me a letter saying "I hate you" then P.S. that she's still not over me, then puts up an umbrella to avoid the purple rain when doves cry. I'm speaking of a psychotic love, that nothing can be diagnosed enough, no anti-biotich love.

Basically a girl that will stickwitchu without doing too much even if it seems like to much. One that never knew what we were missing till we found this true love.
 

Casey

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#2
Dude, that was awesome. The MJ, Prince, 2Pac and Gaga song titles were my favorites. Good job. Are you familiar with all those Prince songs or did you just look up track names online? Some of them like "Orgasm" "Thunder" and "Sex In The Summer" are a little obscure to most people so I was just wondering. "Orgasm" isn't even a song, more of an interlude really. But "Thunder" and "Sex In The Summer" are two of my favorite songs from their respective albums.
 

Shadows

Well-Known Member
#3
Honestly, I didn't even know Thunder was one of them, I just wanted to rhyme a little every now and then. hahaha. I am familiar with most Prince songs 'cuz of my momma. However, i am mainly familiar with the ones that were released around the 1999' time.

Thanks for taking the time to read all that. Almost every word is a song though. Some are from Paramore and well, you got the obvious ones. ;)

Oh, I'm working on my flow for that one track I sent you. It sounds a lot better and I got rid of my filler lines to flow it better. I'm trying to see what I can do with all that. Thanks for touching the old version up, it helped me realize a lot of things.
 

Ristol

New York's Ambassador
#6
I understand you admitted to not using proper grammar, but I don't think there was one complete sentence in that entire piece. Even if it's a song that's a problem. But anyway, nice references.
 

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