Never Be The Same

[Shadows]

Trying to stir the notepad up again. Here's a Poem I wrote a long time ago: Check it...

Sleepless nights
Stary Skys
Never been the same

Meaningless life
Fighting stressed strife
Severed by that name

Getting used
Hit with hues
That haunts me everyday

Sweating blues
Quitting truce
Heart Stompt until gray

No return
But It yearns
For a better tomorrow

Dirty urn
Feel it burn
For blood it borrows

To stay alive
For a drive
For another day

Yet today
Or another day
Never be the same

 

[ImmortalTech]

hmm interesting.. sorry I dont know how to critique poetry, so I dont have great feedback

 

[Shadows]

^honestly, I don't really write much. I just write stuff. Sometimes I explain it thoroughly, other times, I like to leave the audience confused with stuff like this, so they can perceive what they want.

 

[DaDeathGod]

its good i like it