okay , i know i havent posted in here for a long, except a few responses every now and then, but here im finally giving a poem for review. Lately me and my man have been having some problems, going back and forth. There is a line in there that says "always and forever" and just to clarify, always and forever until eternity and after, is a saying that we used to have, so yup here it is, hope you all enjoy.
man there is no words to describe the feeling
of losing the one i love, your slipping away
in this relationship, deteriation is revealing
i see memories of us, fading everyday
my loud tears are echoed through the phone
begging for you to have this be no more
screaming, for your heart to be my home
but you refuse to open your door
maybe because we are two exact opposites
thats why we cant seem to understand
im screaming and crying as you make your resist's
you will never understand my demand
you think im doing it to control you
baby thats not the case at all
im scared of losing the one i love, too
a graceful yet silent fall
a fall of the one thing that once stood great
our relationship, no doubts, no tears
now we are plumting to our fate
because of both our anger and fears
maybe because your black when im white (not race wise)
my feelings are protrayed differently
through darkness you see the light
But in the light, i see the eary
lance, theres nothing i can say
all i know is that i need you here
to wipe my tears away
because without you, my heart continues to sear
i dont want you to lose you
as a matter of fact i cant
but if thats something you must do
than please end my rant
by telling me you need to be free
and no longer need us
Tell me that we no longer are to be
And that this love became a bust
But if you want me, and want another kiss
please just change your ways
you work on that, and ill work on this
and we will be happy again someday
It will take hard work from BOTH of us two
And relapeses will come and go
But if you love me like i love you
"always and forever", we must TRULY know
Im begging of you, to please make up your mind
No more back and forth of "who should"
maturity has begun now, no more time
Time for you and me, to enter adult hood
i remember the song you wrote back to me
of how you are no longer a kid
Saying "you made me a man", but i cant see
is that the truth, or did you just fib
If thats the case, im begging of you
to let me continue on
let me help you mature and continue
help you become even more strong
By keeping your word
and letting someone you love know it
and no more lies, that pierce me like swords
with that, you will have no faults, let me show it
man there is no words to describe the feeling
of losing the one i love, your slipping away
in this relationship, deteriation is revealing
i see memories of us, fading everyday
my loud tears are echoed through the phone
begging for you to have this be no more
screaming, for your heart to be my home
but you refuse to open your door
maybe because we are two exact opposites
thats why we cant seem to understand
im screaming and crying as you make your resist's
you will never understand my demand
you think im doing it to control you
baby thats not the case at all
im scared of losing the one i love, too
a graceful yet silent fall
a fall of the one thing that once stood great
our relationship, no doubts, no tears
now we are plumting to our fate
because of both our anger and fears
maybe because your black when im white (not race wise)
my feelings are protrayed differently
through darkness you see the light
But in the light, i see the eary
lance, theres nothing i can say
all i know is that i need you here
to wipe my tears away
because without you, my heart continues to sear
i dont want you to lose you
as a matter of fact i cant
but if thats something you must do
than please end my rant
by telling me you need to be free
and no longer need us
Tell me that we no longer are to be
And that this love became a bust
But if you want me, and want another kiss
please just change your ways
you work on that, and ill work on this
and we will be happy again someday
It will take hard work from BOTH of us two
And relapeses will come and go
But if you love me like i love you
"always and forever", we must TRULY know
Im begging of you, to please make up your mind
No more back and forth of "who should"
maturity has begun now, no more time
Time for you and me, to enter adult hood
i remember the song you wrote back to me
of how you are no longer a kid
Saying "you made me a man", but i cant see
is that the truth, or did you just fib
If thats the case, im begging of you
to let me continue on
let me help you mature and continue
help you become even more strong
By keeping your word
and letting someone you love know it
and no more lies, that pierce me like swords
with that, you will have no faults, let me show it
