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[Beautiful Angel]

This is one of the first poems i have written in over 4 years...my writers block is Finally Gone!
It's nice to be back here and posting again
Give your input it's much appreciated
*Kel*

When i think about you
I get an instant smile.

When i See you I feel
So much Better

After a long day i just can't wait
To be in your arms.

When i'm with you
I feel so safe

When you're not next to me
I find it very hard to sleep.

Everytime i think about you
I can see myself with you forever.

You are everything
I've been looking for.

I'm so happy I met you!

 

[Jurhum]

First poem I read from you. it's very nice.. i liked the way you wrote it.. two lines at a time... very good..

 

[~live2tell~]

I thought this was real nice, it was simple yet you spoke so much, lovely vocab and a good structure. Glad to hear you left your writers block, keep them coming!

 

[Beautiful Angel]

thank you for the replies

 

[KiRsTyBoO]

Nice poem Kel,
Glad to see u writing again.

Its a nice simple piece, gets your feelings over excellently
with good vocab and flow

XxXxX

 

[Beautiful Angel]

thanx Kirsty

 

[True Thugz]

OH NO! Love poems..* why me? *...haha jokes
Welcome back to PJ. Poem is pretty much str8 forward. If your happy well I'm happy..hehe
You still not giving your poems titles?

Good to see you back.

 

[jm5471]

i liked the direct messages and good for ya gettin outa that writers block

 

[kman_69]

very simplistic....but nice

4 years?!? shit! lol i take it u havnt posted in PJ before then?

 

[assassin_4001]

simple yet nice, not the best though but pretty much a nice piece, keeep it up

 

[k69atie]

I really enjoyed this! Nice and simple but a very clear meaning!

keep them coming

 

[Beautiful Angel]

OH NO! Love poems..* why me? *...haha jokes
Welcome back to PJ. Poem is pretty much str8 forward. If your happy well I'm happy..hehe
You still not giving your poems titles?

Good to see you back.

Thanx for the reply
LOL @ still no titles.....i have some p oems that have titiles
It's good to be back

 

[Beautiful Angel]

i liked the direct messages and good for ya gettin outa that writers block

thanx for the reply, it's nice to have that writers block gone

 

[Beautiful Angel]

very simplistic....but nice

4 years?!? shit! lol i take it u havnt posted in PJ before then?

thank you.......i used to moderate this forum many years ago, i've been around this board since 1999

 

[Beautiful Angel]

simple yet nice, not the best though but pretty much a nice piece, keeep it up

well thanx, i'd say it's pretty damn good after having writers block for 4years

 

[Beautiful Angel]

I really enjoyed this! Nice and simple but a very clear meaning!

keep them coming

thanx katie, ima try

 

[Saint33]

its sweet, u can tell u truly mean those things

its a very nice poem :thumb:

 

[Beautiful Angel]

thanx for the reply it's much appreciated