on the other side (inspired by 2pac)

[radkin]

I don’t know what awaits me in the event of my demise
Is what the Christians say true
Or is it all just lies
Is there a god for me waiting on the other side

Are evil men really banished to hell
And good men sent above
Will I see the family that I lost
And never got to love
Is my family waiting on the other side

Will my soul find happiness
And peace at last
Will I just not make it due to sins of past
Or will I rest eternally in peace……. on the other side

 

[Levendi]

how come no replies people, come on.

nice piece man, asking the big questions that run through everyone's mind at some stage in life, we can relate to that. I liked the last stanza the best -

"Will my soul find happiness
And peace at last
Will I just not make it due to sins of past
Or will I rest eternally in peace……. on the other side"


keep doin your thing man...


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[kman_69]

cool format

and diggin the flow...except id say to make it like one line longer before each "on the other side" line...coz it seems like it would fit together more if u ellaborated a little bit...


dope tho, def feelin this one

peace.1

how come no replies people, come on..

yeah no1 seems to be replying to shit anymore man...thats why i been trying to reply to everyones shit...

fuckin lazy mods

 

[Blunted Dreamz]

Very philosophical questions, I love those the best!!! Sorry, I'm not allowed to give away the answers... Keep droppin these poetic questions by all means, very enjoyable to read AND think about.

 

[~live2tell~]

I don’t know what awaits me in the event of my demise
Is what the Christians say true
Or is it all just lies
Is there a god for me waiting on the other side

Are evil men really banished to hell
And good men sent above
Will I see the family that I lost
And never got to love
Is my family waiting on the other side

Will my soul find happiness
And peace at last
Will I just not make it due to sins of past
Or will I rest eternally in peace……. on the other side

I thought this was very well written and I loved how you incorporated Tupac in it. Very thought provoking and interesting to read. Keep it up!