One of my verses from 2 years ago

Shadows

Well-Known Member
#1
I was deleting a lot of un-needed files on my computer to optimize it, and came across this song i was writing to my girl when i was working on an album. This was going to be the "girl song," on the album.

Keep in mind this is 2 years old, and that i never perfected the flow of it. :eek:

Tell me what you like or dis-like, b/c i want to get back to writing in the summer. Thanx.


I found feelings with meaning that words can not describe/
For a female who’d be male enough to start a Gs drive/
But still the cute chica who’d be known to be shy/
Baby I’m glad to see the strategy for you to always be mine/
Worked to the point where I see my homie appointed me right/
Weak lovers jealousy’s cry, one never felt a G like me go inside/
We coincide, you having my back, me tapping that back, like that, ‘till we back on track// (unfinished)
 

Kadafi Son

Well-Known Member
#2
It seemed like a typical "girl" verse but I liked the last to lines. But good for you for trying to get back to writing this summer. I'm on the same track. But i wouldn't put anything like this on the album
 

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