Remembering...

[KiRsTyBoO]

Im scared about posting this, aint let anyone see my writing for ages,,, thanks for peeping, be nice

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Remembering

Old memories float to the surface of my mind,

drinking in the feeling that washes over me,

your skin, your eyes, your touch, your heart,

desperatly grabbing at every thought,

knowing the memories are all I have left,

new memories will never form,

only shadows follow me through dark times,

but it once was you,

in the mirror is your reflection,

and when I close my eyes I can feel your arms protecting me,

but my eyes open again,

the beautiful reflection is revelved as nothing more then an illusion,

your arms are only in my imagination,

and your protection has vanished forever.

 

[True Thugz]

Wow, that was kool. Kool prolly ain't the word that best describes this but it was the first thing that came to mind. I liked the whole thing. It's well written :thumb:

Good to see you back

 

[Saint33]

thats rilly good :thumb: it flows real nice and seems u rilly put sum thought into this. U should post ur poems more often :thumb:

 

[jm5471]

i liked it, it has a different type of style than most people who post in here, keep it up

 

[Kadafi Son]

I can agree with the rest of the posts. I at one point I felt like that. And I could have said those exact words 2 a girl. You know what that is? That, my poetic friend, is called the type of talent where you can relate to people without know them. I wanna see what else you can do.....peace

 

[kman_69]

this was tight...loved the ending!
and when I close my eyes I can feel your arms protecting me,

but my eyes open again,

the beautiful reflection is revelved as nothing more then an illusion,

your arms are only in my imagination,

and your protection has vanished forever.


very nice!

peace

 

[Cown]

Very nice piece of writing, I enjoyed the last part the most, very poetic and very nice put together. Try posting some of your other stuff too

 

[Blunted Dreamz]

Very good, glad you decided to break through and share. Old memories rock and suck so much to me, thinking about what is no longer mine to 'play' with.

 

[XIAN]

I think almost everyone can relate to this one. I get that feeling about people and it's like, "weren't you just here a second ago?" But I think it's a good reminder to us about how life is a process, always changing and always moving.

~peace~

 

[Rahim]

its a good poem, kinda reminds me of my situation..or how i feel sometimes..

 

[KJ13]

thats a real good poem. im not sure exactly what it means to you but i think many people can relate to it in different ways. i can definately relate but i dont think i want to explain how. great job.

 

[~live2tell~]

This is poetic, great imagery and like most posts said something that alot of people can relate to, keep writing :thumb: