Riddle In The Dark

[Jocka]

Haven't been around in a while. No real excuse ,just been hit with life all of a sudden. I really missed some of ya'lls work though. For those I didn't reply to, I did read some of urs and plan to read others. I just wanted to give replies to those with few replies.. thats just how I do things.

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Riddle in the dark
Find me with your soul.
Hear me digging deep.
See me folding cold.
Feel me shaking wildly
Smell my sweat and fear
Taste the world around me
Find me lying here

Riddle in the dark
Find me with your heart
Hear me breathe in slowly
See me fall apart
Feel me reaching out
Smell my odor overpower
Taste the tears of doubt
Find me where you cower

Riddle in the dark
Find me with your mind
Hear the screams in silence
See my words confined
Feel my panting gasps
Smell my body dieing
Taste the hate I brought
Find me always denying

Riddle in the dark
Find me with your senses
Hear me calling for you
See me hurdle fences
Feel me grabbing on you
Smell me coming fast
Taste the love I bring you
Find me here at last

 

[KJ1]

ii thou ght that was really good but what Riddle in thd Dark??
enjoyed reading though

 

[Jocka]

riddle in the dark represents the people around me. confused and lost like their in the dark trying to figure out the riddle that is I (((i thought way too much into that explanation)))

but thanx for the reply.

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

Hey!!! Long Time huh?

Wat Can I say That even from years back??? ur skill with words is tight Josh, whether u write it simple or complicating its always tight with some awsome feeling and meaning, ur words are never empty - I'm so glad it hasnt changed...

This piece to me was simple but the depth to it just took it to another level.. I was feelin this, Ur flow was easy, everything just rolled out nicely!

Riddle in the dark
Find me with your mind
Hear the screams in silence
See my words confined
Feel my panting gasps
Smell my body dieing
Taste the hate I brought
Find me always denying


^^^ The ending was my fav part but this part here grabbed me... Loved the imagry came thru while i was reading this, Josh seriously feelin this piece overall... Keep it up!

 

[Jocka]

ah brat! out of all the people on here, i think i missed you the most.

Thnx for the reply. I hardly write any more so when I do I go out of my way to give it a "design" if that makes sense lol.

 

[DaRoYaLbRaT]

ah brat! out of all the people on here, i think i missed you the most.

Thnx for the reply. I hardly write any more so when I do I go out of my way to give it a "design" if that makes sense lol.

Always a pleasure reading ur work, so thank u! & that makes Perfect Sense Jocka & I deff missed ya aswell!

how did this place get so slow?? wat happened in here??? SoOoO sad! I remember when the page use to crash coz there was too much traffic.. lol, cant c that happening again...

pz babyboi!

 

[KJ1]

yeah jocka i get ya now... good stuff