Rules 2 Survivin'

Kadafi Son

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#1
I haven't dropped nothin in a while cuz of my location issue. But since I'm here, I'll do a lil somethin'

Rules 2 Survivin'

This is strictly for my nation that's oppressed
Livin' in the ghetto streets and poverty, none the less
In life, you gotta put in the endeavors to survive
Comprehend these rules or in the slums, you're gonna die

Rule1: Keep belief in whatever you believe
Faith is all you're gonna have when your closest ones leave

Rule2: Listen to the game that wise one school to you
These ain't the days to ignorant, so never die a fool

Rule3: Watch your circle of trust, don't be naive
Never hang around the crowd that makes it hard to achieve

Rule4: You gotta earned respect before you obtain
Respect is somethin' significant, it's apart to your name

Rule5: Spread your wealth so that we have a strong community
Remember we livin' in a society where the victims are you and me

Rule6: Just stay true to your emotions at all times
Be remembered for who you are and gain a weathly mind

Rule7: Stay determined and focus upon your dreams
Realize your reality is a dangerous scene

Rule8: Repeat 1 thru 7 and be a cause
Give back to which you grew and evolve without flaws
Just a lil somethin' that your game should recognize
Witness life thru the Heaven's eyes

Peace, until next time
 
#5
i like this one alot, my favorite lines were

Rule6: Just stay true to your emotions at all times
Be remembered for who you are and gain a weathly mind


that one hit home for me. ii really enjoy your style of writing. keep it up
 
#8
i myself am white so i might not be able to relate to all that you have put in here but outside of that i like the rhyme scheme that you used, very creative
 
#9
I admire the structure set out in this poem, I can't relate as I don't feel oppressed but I can certainly understand where you're coming from. You wrote some wise rules and it seems you did it in a very artistic way - props to you :thumb:
 
#10
damn man...so where i buy that rule book at??? I need some help...lol.. nah for real though shit was ill. The message was crystal clear. seems like you got a good heart and you know whats up. all i can say is that if we had a few more cats like you the world would be a better place.
 

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