Sanja

[True Thugz]

Haha..yeah man. Sup Belo! That was good man. Your writing skills are great. This girl has to like this.
Great work :thumb:

 

[ArtsyGirl]

On the wisps of winds that whip my ears, I hear them call your name
And when I get to heaven I’ll hear angels sing the same

My favourite part, and you finished off strong. She should LOVE it! Well done. Let us know what she says

 

[The.Menace]

Nice poem belo, I just love the way you put these words together. The msg, hm, seems like you're in love, .....did you show her that poem? If so, what was the reaction (I want all the details, how hot was the sex?)?

 

[kimbo_thug]

DAM HER IM JELOUS LOL
seriously nice poem really felt it
fav lines :
Please take these words and feel their warmth whenever you are cold
I wish upon a shooting star for you, for me, to hold

youve made me feel ike a wanna go n write a poem lol xx

 

[Mr.Deuce]

tru deep poetic stuff..i like it.

 

[GhettoStar]

this has feeling all in it I love how yoyu compare the lines of whisp of the wind and so forth as such as your standing there actaully wishing on a star. I also love the last line and how you dont just say for you and me to hold or so forth but you sepreate them with commas and make each individual (you, me) thus creating a new flow that is even deeper. This is a great piece of work and I enjoyed readin it. Makes me want to get my poetic swagger back.