sexual fantasy

#1
feeling a warmth consuming me
closing my eyes, beginning to dream
dream of something, matched to ecstasy
it is my fantasy

The Fantasy:

rose petals lining our every move
lit candles to set the mood
warm bath water to sooth
movements so smooth

lightly being caressed
relieving my stress
hands begin to press
now control is less

no longer in his arms
my morals disarmed
struck by his sexual charm
charisma so hot, can do harm

hips move inbetween my thighs
feeling so good, bound to cry
holding back my screams i try
his movements got me feeling high

my turn now, force him to lay down
the feeling of a sex slave, now turned around
sliding him in orally till i hear that sacred sound
moans, keep going till i feel my tongue begin to pound

make his genitals begin to throb
make him release so hard, wants to sob
feeling of accomplishment, i did my job
because all his energy i managed robbed

tables flipped once again
chill down my spine he begins to send
as he slowly begins sliding his tongue in
a burning fire coming from within

let his tongue keep doing its work
till my body finally starts to twirk
my nerves are beggining to jerk
im at release, going beserk

this fantasy its not all done
through all this we became one
lay my head on my chest to feel his heart drum
getting held in his arms,till we see the sun

this fantasy is almost at its all
the only thing thats left, being kissed on my head as reality falls
as i lose sight of whats real and not, my dreams begin to call
I dream of the one who caused me to get passed my sexual wall

the man of my dreams
the one who fulfilled my fantasy
but this was no dream its reality
i wake up, hes laying beside me

so i kiss him on his lips
and tell him this
i had a dream of us in complete bliss
i tell him all that happened, as i reminisce

i just say one more line
through all this time
baby, your the man in the dreams of mine
i love you lance, as i let our fingers intertwine
 

Belo

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#2
Aww that was sweet... n hot too... lol
I did find the flow kinda switched and changed a bit from stanza to stanza which kinda made it harder to follow
I can see you wrote it for your man and I'm sure he loved it.. always nice wen someone writes something for you
Keep up the writing u horny bugger :D
Peace
 
#3
Overall I liked it, however I found parts of it a little boring. I think it could be made better by using more vivid words, also playing about with imagery a lil more in a piece like this always makes it more interesting to read. Good job though.
 
#4
Some of the wording, ya feel a little off on. But I imagine u was getting urself heated lol so i'll let that pass. Overall, it was pretty good. I liked how you went step by step.. thats good ;)
 

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