Short Biography Of A Black Adolescent

[Kadafi Son]

I got a lot of pressure on my chest I need to relieve and I wanna share it with ya'll. Feel me...?

My father was a decent man but caught up in the drugs.
My mother soon got addicted and so they fell in love.
So I was a product of a tool used to keep my nation in the dark.
But pay attention and see the ascending of a black and angry heart.
For many years, my mother was beaten and I was affected.
I grew to become calm and quiet but I was neglected.
I never trusted anybody but the Lord because many times I was decieved.
So I stayed by myself in the window, trying to feel a breeze.
But that's a difficult task when my sisters are getting raped.
When your mama's an alcohlic, tell me, can you concentrate?
Label me a Silent Mercenary, cuz I want a better world for the kids.
I am the next generation, but people treat me like shit.
All I ask is for a day when I can smile in satisfaction.
A beautiful and understanding girl to fill my mind with compassion.
I fell in love once, but she might have fucked my homie.
If this shit is true, then all my life, I'm going to be lonely.
I'd give a girl anything, but my curse is generousity.
I'm surrounded by people, but nobody would ever talk to me.
A lone soul. Me and my mama try to work it out.
It's hard to pay the rent and we in debt. What's that about?
We've struggled for too many years. Now my hearts cold.
When will I fall into suicidal emotions? Only God knows.
I'm a senior in high school, now. I'm feeling weary.
I'm your average 17 year old, but a little bit more teary.
Hear me. Don't fear me. I stay true even though you think I'm too much.
We'll Fuck The World til the day I pull the guns clutch. (Damn).
To calm myself, I like to like to listen to mellow melodies.
Rap, oldschool. The devil can'tget the best of me.
See I'm a soldier. I stand up for my people in poverty.
Niggaz and Latinos can't find a source of psychology.
This is advise. Find an outlet for all of your pain.
I can relate because this fucked life has got me going insane.

So if you can't understand me by now, then read between my lines.
Vision the demonz and ghost. Like Pac, it's "Danger Time".
My dream's to stop the violence, rape, and genocide.
Feel me? Then we can ride and give way much more brighter lives.

 

[Jackoffalot]

yo if you wrote that....thats how you rap....most people dont know how to write but thats the way you write

 

[Kadafi Son]

yo if you wrote that....thats how you rap....most people dont know how to write but thats the way you write

Yeah, I wrote that from my head, but what do mean? Is that good or bad?

 

[~live2tell~]

I like it, the message, the story, its dark yet honest. I felt the flow was a lil off in places (not many), other than though nice drop :thumb:

 

[Synful*Luv]

I don't come here too often but I noticed your username and I decided to check out what you did.

Man, no words to describe how much i felt that, i loved the play on words and how you told us a story without preaching to us.

You're a deep brother to be so young, and life gets like that sometimes, if you ever need someone to vent to, get at me.

The more you tell your story, the lesser the influence it has over your life, until one day you can look back at it and smile.

And believe, I speak from experience.

Real words, I loved it.